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Punished

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Punished

                            ~ Punished~
                        
One evening with her dad she met this man at a bar very
handsome well mannered visiting from England.
After a few visits she started feeling him approaching her 
with nice compliments.

His attention made her fall In love with him
For months he took her out running to the beach 
shouting out loud I love your body i love your eyes
you’ll never belong to nobody but me.
 
On a moonlight night he was holding her so tight 
kissing her lips caressing her tits expressing his 
desire to light up the fire that was burning in their
entire body and soul.

As he was her first this is what she thought at the 
beginning she was very reserved yet she liked the 
fire she was feeling they were new to her his kissing 
was sensuous he smelled lovely he was caressing her
hair while sitting on the sand she was so taken by her
thoughts suddenly she heard.

Oh my darling let me love you my way let me make you 
my woman without any delay I beg you to give up and 
stop the fight I am promising at the same time to marry 
you very soon I will ask your dad that you will become my 
wife next Sunday at soon.

She wanted to believe him her head was spinning her heart
was beating to the sounds of his powerful movements
she was reaching the sky so quickly sensations of ecstasy 
she was feeling with his compliments whispering his love 
to her out loud while she was dreaming of the marriage 
as being lifted up on a carriage listening to the horses 
tapping on the course to the hotel room where they will 
spend their honeymoon as she will become that bride 
at noon.

Before even her dreams were over she felt him suddenly 
role over and ran away with no delay she could not understand
why ? Why? Did he leave with no good-bye.

Not realizing she was undressed hurried to get dressed ran to look 
from side to side asking herself why did he hide he promised me 
to be his bride? even if she was yet a child.

She sat where they loved each other looking at the ocean maybe
he will come back he must he told her he is in love.

Already it was dark in a low voice having no choice she ran 
home straight to her room wiping her running tears and fears
covering her feet to feel some heat and fell asleep not to see
her dad as maybe tomorrow he will come back with an 
explanation to his act. 

Hoping not to be deceived and very soon to be relieved
when he ‘ll knock on their door and swipe her off her feet 
tell her dad to fix their marriage.

She waited for days and days but that day never came 
she knew then it was only a game and she`ll never see 
him again and will never be the same.
                          
That early morning she woke up before her dad to cheer up 
herself for him not to doubt she had maybe made a huge 
mistake.
Having her coffee she pulled the newspaper and screamed
Oh Oh the man she loved was an addicted rapist being 
searched from the Interpol in England, he had convinced 
everybody doctors and nurses that he was cured.

Continuing to read she read his history that he was battling 
addiction of raping teenagers for the past twenty years. Lived
most of the time in jail.
She cried and cried she was raped by an addicted rapist who
was never cured.
                             
She could not eat or drink not knowing what to think 
while running to the sink that’s when she found out 
but couldn’t shout that she was carrying a rapist child. 

Where are you? She thought you were honest
But you were only an ordinary man still battling
your addiction.

Forgive me Oh My God! Her dad
forgave her out of love to his innocent daughter.

She had to keep her child and trusted herself
to bring him up not like his father.
And she did her son became an international lawyer.

   Therese Bacha
      27/5/2013
Contest for PD....Any Poem Goes.

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  1. Date: 5/30/2013 9:58:00 AM
    Wow! What a story. I couldn't stop reading. Betty

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/30/2013 10:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Betty, thank you for passing by, and glad you liked my poem. Love Terry
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 2:41:00 PM
    Congrats on your well deserved win Terry! I so much love this pen. AO

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/30/2013 10:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good morning son, how are you? thank you for passing by, as nobody remembers me often like you do. Love ma xo
  1. Date: 5/26/2013 8:23:00 PM
    Hi Terry, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. Have yourself a beautiful Memorial Day, this Monday. God bless the ones who fought and keep on fighting. Always~ LINDA

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/26/2013 8:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi PD, its always so so nice to have you here, you are so giving, and a real friend. Never misses to pass by me. Thank you and have a wonderful happy vacation day. Love Terry xoxo I am trying to find the site of The Featured poem of the week. I will keep trying. Thanks xoxo
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 11:17:00 PM
    Such an emotive write here Theresa, it is a thumbnail picture of lifes ups and down moments for sure..' the ending though with the triumph of Loves labours rewarded is heartening congratulations on the feature and for showing (it is possible that love may conquer all)

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/24/2013 10:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Joe, i do thank you so much for passing by, nowadays I must be forgotten by other members, but I am happy you did pass. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 5/23/2013 9:34:00 AM
    this poem is so well worded it tears me apart to read it. i love your rhyming pattern and writing style! and absolutely magnificent poem! XD

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/23/2013 3:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank yo so much XD. Nice surprise , and the sharing was great. Terry
  1. Date: 5/22/2013 6:37:00 PM
    Well Teresa, A very emotional and powerful story. I was deeply affected and the last line made the poem even more stunning. :)

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/22/2013 8:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Karen its the first time I see u here thank you so much for passing by. Terry
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 5:19:00 AM
    Ma, the whole pen was classy. Very well written. Thank God it's all endeds in what I could described as 'Tragicomedy' Bcos the product end up being an international lawyer. What a great achievement! This write is really my FAVORITE cos it says alot. Thank you for sharing. Well done Terry. AO

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 5/20/2013 8:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You made me feel as if its my son when you started your poem with Ma, as both my children call me ma, so honest of you the way you comment and for the FAV. You made my day. Looking forward for more sharing between you and me. See u later son. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 4/5/2013 9:40:00 AM
    Gosh Terry; This is awesome. Sometimes when women are young girls - we make so many mistakes. I'm just glad that my daughter was from the man I loved and not from the one that raped me. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 4/5/2013 10:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes it is a relief for you, so so so sorry for what happened to you, always in my thoughts. Love Terry xoxoxoxo
  1. Date: 3/25/2013 3:20:00 PM
    terry, this is an unusual love story!! Very imaginative. It makes me wonder what is rape really? she seemed to want this from him and yet, if she were still a child, it would indeed be rape. I think it happens all too often in our modern days, with all the young people under age 18 who think they are in love with an older man, but he is only taking advantage of them. Very interesting story, sweetie. Luv, Andrea

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 3/25/2013 3:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Andrea, yes the way you put its analyses is right, maybe my subconscious is still thinking in our past, because we were very naive when we our generation was young. Glad you are fine, will write later.....Love Terry xoxoxo
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 3:39:00 PM
    Great poem/ life story Terry,,,, though on the sad side. Men and little girls,,, the bible says men will lust , and women will have pain in child birth. Happy New Year Terry, to you and yours ;}

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 1/1/2013 3:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Debbie......life is lived with suffering and happiness......our Faith help us to survive.......Happy New Year to You to......so nice of you to read my poem....xoxo Terry
  1. Date: 12/17/2012 1:12:00 PM
    Terry, your story is lovely, but took a turn for the worse, one can only grow up without fulling pursuing the true child in the inside... it is a sad world when it's tooken away. good poem...pd

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 12/17/2012 2:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi PD.....i love it when you read one of my poems.....i feel stronger by the day....especially coming from you.....thank you so much.....yes i know it is sad....in our days things were so different than now......drama was nearly at each corner.....xoxoxo Terry