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It was

It was love that time around,
Or so I thought it was
It was you and me back then
Now it’s finally passed

It was believed to last forever
All our friends thought the same
Now all our ties have been severed
Traces destroyed, ourselves to blame

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  1. Date: 11/24/2012 3:38:00 PM

    Aleck, your poem is full of emotion, oh yes, I have felt the bittersweet sword of lost love also, well done. Constance

    Paulino Avatar Aleck Paulino Date: 11/27/2012 4:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you =)
  1. Date: 11/24/2012 3:24:00 PM

    sad write,but life has it ups and downs,we just have to learn to bounce back,welcome to the Soup,enjoy

    Paulino Avatar Aleck Paulino Date: 11/27/2012 4:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you =) I am indeed enjoying this site. Feels great to be a part of it!