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The Painful Truth

I close my eyes to imagine your face
but pain invades and the image is erased

tears gather at the corner of my eyes
as i sit and remember all of your lies

I try to reach out to see if your there
but the feeling is cold and your presence is bare

reality stings as i tremble alone
searching for answers im left only to roam

puzzled and confused and in terrible disbeleif
how your goodbye was so sudden and unexpectantly brief

I struggle with knowing with what i should do
how to cope with the loss of someone I knew

but after what you did I know it was wrong
still you were the one to leave and be gone

I had hope that forgiveness would be more than enough
but as i was trying you chose to give up

now im left with emotions of many different shades
and the connection is gone as your memory fades




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  1. Date: 11/24/2012 7:52:00 PM
    I really like your poem. It truly describes a failed relationship and the emotions involved. Was it inspired by personal experience?

    marrier Avatar nicole marrier
    Date: 11/24/2012 7:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you and yes unfortunatly it was inspired by my personal experience.
  1. Date: 11/24/2012 12:44:00 PM
    i was commenting on this very poem when i was inspired to write sometimes love dies my comment turned into the first two lines of the poem "i fell in love once and ended up flat on my face"..so thank you for the inspiration

    marrier Avatar nicole marrier
    Date: 11/24/2012 1:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    im so grateful that my words could inspire another. Thank you for reading and exapnding on the topic.
  1. Date: 11/24/2012 10:23:00 AM
    A very well written poem, but it's a bit sad Nicole. - I wish you a pleasant and relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    marrier Avatar nicole marrier
    Date: 11/24/2012 3:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you and to you also