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Writers Block


They gather in the corner of my brain snuggled up
The ‘T’s protecting the ‘I’s …an umbrella effect
I try to cajole them to come out, but they are having none of it.
I promise them I will play their favourite music
Seems they have heard that one before,
A change of diet might do the trick I thought
But they tell me they like boiled eggs, three times a day
I tell them they can go on holiday twice a year
They just reply they have no passport.
I begin to lose my temper, threaten them to come out
And stand to attention on my page,
They jiggle about and spell out the word ‘United’
They are on strike! 
I am diseased with nothingness
I retire to bed in the hope that I have a terrible
Nightmare, scaring the life out of them and 
In the morning they beg to be released.

© 14/10/2012

David Williams

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  1. Date: 3/25/2013 4:45:00 PM

    It is a common malady we all get Glad you have made a humerous piece out of these stubborn 'words' LOL

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 8:09:00 AM

    So true. Enjoyed this tremendously. I think as writers and poets we all identify. Some people write brilliant pieces when sad, others when happy. The worst is when a flash of inspiration pops into our heads-- we forget to pen it instantly, and then it dissapears.

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 5:36:00 PM

    haha this is witty and clever, the title drew me in because this is something I experience at times, too! bursts of inspiration, then nothingness...you can't force it :-)

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:09:00 AM

    Treasure of poetic sense always gets release in the morning time in general because of freshness after night rest. Wonderful capture. Thanks................ Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 5:03:00 PM

    Great stuff David, very descriptive of what a writer can go thru. I wrote on the same subject, blessings Carl

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 11:51:00 PM

    Yes it is really frustrating when you experience it. Very nice write. (thanks for the comment you posted on my tanka)

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 9:28:00 PM

    Hello David,,, lol.... i hope you scare that disease away... love this one... god thinking. always~ TEX

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 5:33:00 PM

    I love this! And I hate writers block! Very nice David :)

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 5:23:00 PM

    "I tell them they can go on holiday twice a year, they just reply they have no passport." Hahahahahaha... just make them some passport, so there will be no excuse next time XD,I really amused by this poem, thank you for checking out my page, it's been a pleasure - Hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 2:50:00 PM

    imagination it is grand, partly blocked, no not your hand, poetry flows upon demand, no blockage here i see, the realm of fantasy, working well 4me, strike up the band... re Dave Williams "Writers block" not... Don Johnson

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 2:31:00 PM

    Ha,hahahaha..You just need to tease them a little. :o) Haha..Loved it!

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 2:11:00 PM

    Wow, this poem is spectacular, by far one of my favorites I have ever read (and I'm not just saying that). Is it published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Wish you the best with your poetry and I hope you get published! : )Jacob Cramer

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 1:03:00 PM

    I think we can all relate to writers block. Enjoyed your poem.

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 10:56:00 AM

    You have described it perfectly my friend but I am sure you will chase all them little blocking beggars away... as it seems you have already started .xx

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:18:00 AM

    Writers Block??? Goes to the hall of fame, to scare all the others away, great writers block my dear friend... Xoxo Carma

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:08:00 AM

    David - rghhhhagchhhh! Can you do something with that. can relate. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 7:08:00 AM

    Oh yes Dave that word scares me all the time... It creeps in when least expected.. But you have brought nice light to it and shown the way... Hope your less rainy over there my friend...Michael

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 10:40:00 PM

    Writers Block? Yeah! UH HUH! Great Write! This would be good for the Nightmare contest. Eh?

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 10:23:00 AM

    David..if you can write a great poem like this during writers block,you`ll write our heads around when your muse comes around again!! Have a peaceful weekend my friend!

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 10:12:00 AM

    A brilliant and very very clever poem, if writers block can produce wonders like this, wow the world of poetry awaits...

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 6:25:00 AM

    That's sad but hilarious. Three boiled eggs a day....gross. Thanks for my comments on my new poems. I thought the avatar was you and you looked so young. So, when you said you had 3 married children, I was really confused. xxoo Holly

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 11:58:00 PM

    This is very very good David...you are one creative poet..and nothing can keep a good writer down for long..have a nice weekend..you deserve a soupy treat after this poem..

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 9:31:00 PM

    oh, that is awesome how you ended with "in the morning they beg to be released" I believe that almost every poet who is sincere in his writing has written at least one poem about the reluctant muse. GOOD one.

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 1:02:00 PM

    Let's head rest - Have a relaxed weekend, David. - Well written. - -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 12:33:00 PM

    Hi David sums up writers block brilliantly, hope you are ok and the words will soon flow my friend, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 11:46:00 AM

    Ha ha, yes this seems to be how writers block feels like at times! The works are right there on the tip of your tongue but you can't seem to say them nor write anything down that resembles any sensible write! This is a intriguing and wondrous poem my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful piece this afternoon, Great Work!!