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The Nobody

In the haziness of the days
at a lost life I gaze and gaze.
For clarity is not a friend
And a faint sun is what I chase.

My exploits; hard to comprehend.
The footings I cannot amend
chokes me in a pit of regret.
Crushing pain draws closer the end.

Much blood I have shed and the sweat
gashes my eyes- I cry, I fret.
But this loneliness of my soul
keeps on playing the death roulette!

Why I leap in the gaping hole
where I fall onto flaming coal,
My skeleton frame turns to ash
And the demon swallows me whole.

With my world I constantly clash.
Hatred empowers me to smash
my brain to embark on madness.
I eat me, I eat all the trash.

How long it will last? The blackness
paves for me a path of sadness.
I walk; in the vilest of ways
I become a man less and less.

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  1. Date: 4/10/2013 5:28:00 PM

    Awesome,, and you won ;} sounds like Aries to me ;} thank you for reading Over Heard Conversations

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 10:56:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your win xx

  1. Date: 2/25/2013 8:23:00 AM

    I think we'll be seeing a lot more of you with talented writes like this Sean.

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 9:52:00 PM

    Hi Sean, ... congratulations with your awesome deep and darken poem* GOODNIGHT!!! xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 1:25:00 PM

    Great writing, Sean...I'm hesitant to say what I feel because this may not be your reality...but from one human being to another, I'd say each one of us are special...unique...there's is no one like you! You're awesome. We live in a tough world today; and it's always been this way. Maybe we must not let our circumstance dictate our lives...our world is dying for love and validation... We treat nature as though we can exist without it. Be good to yourself ; your spirit. Take care. Annalise

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 2:39:00 PM

    A Dark Night of the Soul.. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 4:51:00 PM

    wow, you have really captured the feelings of a man who is descending into loneliness and the pain and sadness of it. Good writing! good title for it.

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 6:31:00 AM

    Thanks for reading and commenting.

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 8:24:00 PM

    Sean, i do not think your ending is true... very deep emotions to share.. some poem here... sometimes when I fall from the top... i feel like the bummest mother of all... always~pd

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 11:52:00 AM

    i am not to familiar with this form Sean but this looks good to me. Well done and I hope this is not you, you are writing about xx