haiku 2 by Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/3/2012 6:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Charles' "Haiku" contest Mandy. I am sorry this is a very late comment. Love, Carol

Date: 11/25/2012 8:48:00 AM

Mandy, I am sure I saw this one before. Glad to see it again on this winners' list. Congrats to you. how is it going? are you going to be putting up a new blog joke for us?

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/25/2012 8:51:00 AM

no this is a rewrite lol xx

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/25/2012 8:50:00 AM

Hi yes will do but pc in use at the moment and i don't have them o my lappy lol thanks by the way xx

Sean Goodwin

Date: 11/25/2012 7:16:00 AM

Nicely done. Like it. A belated congratulation to you.

Erich Goller

Date: 11/24/2012 8:57:00 AM

Congratulation on your win, a very nice expressed Haiku. Thanks for sharing it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 11/24/2012 6:39:00 AM

Mandy thank you for your supports through all of your congrats in my pages, you are really a wonderful person, congrats too on your winning :D - Hug, Yanny

Joseph May

Date: 11/24/2012 4:39:00 AM

congrats on your win Mandy

Leonora Galinta

Date: 11/23/2012 11:40:00 PM

Congratulations on another awesome win my dear Mandy! love and hugs, Leonora

Seren Roberts

Date: 11/23/2012 11:30:00 PM

Great Mandy, you will have to give me lessons now....Seren

yasmin khan

Date: 11/23/2012 11:28:00 PM

this is a fantastic haiku...congrads dear Mandy..on a scintilating win..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2012 9:34:00 PM

a cool poem on a HOT topic!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/23/2012 5:40:00 PM

Mandy,, i like the recycling image,,, congratulations with your win,,xox~pd

Suzette Crous

Date: 11/23/2012 1:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the haiku 101 contest, Mandy. Love, Su

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 11/22/2012 10:16:00 PM

Yes, so true. That's why we have some islands in some cases. Love it, Mandy.

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 11/22/2012 1:34:00 PM

You're a good student ..... who is the teacher? Highly appreciate your visit on my poem. - Have a nice day Mandy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

harry horsman

Date: 11/22/2012 10:33:00 AM

oh you are a quick learner,, this is awesome...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/22/2012 10:35:00 AM

two good tutors thank you xx

daver austin

Date: 11/22/2012 10:12:00 AM

Never thought of it like that, but yes. Good stuff. Love, daver

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/22/2012 10:35:00 AM

Glad you said that daver, that's what I was looking for xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/22/2012 6:56:00 AM

to your haiku YEAH! Goldie a numbered haiku!GREAT, I know we try to be brief in haiku but don't forget your little 'joining words' the articles of 'a,an, the etc.] and remember not put your own opinion in the write..let the reader form their opinion from what you show them. It's easier if you are actually there SEEING it and the content is not coming from TV a book or memory ;)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/22/2012 7:06:00 AM

ok think i get that xx

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/22/2012 6:59:00 AM

you can write from a remembered observation but you must convince the reader you were there, are there OR they can't come with you. [a volcan erupts/downing trees and houses--steam rises] ..see? instead of saying death & destruction SHOW it hon

harry horsman

Date: 11/22/2012 4:29:00 AM

love this mind boggling haiku, and yes the recycling/regrowth a start of life all over again...Soup

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