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Whiteness Contest

Sea caps, white, shadows Fin, cutting above surface White caps part, Great White
Herons calling out Congregating over cove A gaggle of clouds
Eagle soars above Snowshoe hare, new tracks, no hare Disguise of whiteness

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  1. Date: 11/22/2012 12:42:00 PM

    Just learning about haiku Rollo i see i still have a lot to learn xx

    West Avatar Rollo West Date: 11/22/2012 1:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Mandy, thank you for stopping by, and good luck with your quest to learn Haiku. Rollo
  1. Date: 11/22/2012 10:54:00 AM

    (here I am again ....) This is a really awesome haiku Rollo. - Enjoyed this a lot. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    West Avatar Rollo West Date: 11/22/2012 1:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Anne, thank you for stopping by, and your great comment. Rollo
  1. Date: 11/22/2012 5:19:00 AM

    Great Haiku work..Enjoyed reading each one..I like the line "A gaggle of clouds"...Is not a group of geese called a gaggle?...I know that it is one species that that is the term for them..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    West Avatar Rollo West Date: 11/22/2012 1:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Sara, thank you for stopping by. The word gaggle is most often used with geese, yes, but it means "to gather", so can be applied to various things. Rollo
  1. Date: 11/22/2012 4:58:00 AM

    This is an awesome haiku my friend. I enjoyed reading it! Good luck in the contest! Thank you so much for stopping by in my blog. love/hugs, Leonora

    West Avatar Rollo West Date: 11/22/2012 1:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi lwonora, thank you so much for your comment my friend. Rollo