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  1. Date: 3/12/2013 3:07:00 PM
    Highly appreciated.... I am 6th generation Savage and by all accounts in my genealogy files you have accurately described the events of the day..... Great write...... Jake

  1. Date: 2/4/2013 7:08:00 PM
    Lol!! Fabulous talent Sir!! Am enjoying reading your creativeness tonight. Hope all is we'll big hugs,deb

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 5:38:00 PM
    I look forward to the continuation, this was an absolute delight!!

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:51:00 PM
    Great job on this poem. I really enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing. When we have nothing to do - we write. Many blessings. Lucilla

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  1. Date: 11/26/2012 10:36:00 PM
    Well I sure was caught up in the tale and look forward to reading the rest !! You had me laughing with your little speech at the end. Enjoyed !!!

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 3:19:00 PM
    Wow, this poem is spectacular, by far one of my favorites I have ever read (and I'm not just saying that). Is it published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Wish you the best with your poetry and I hope you get published! : )Jacob Cramer You have a gift. Use it to the fullest!

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 5:32:00 AM
    Now this is a hoot!... my kind of stuff! Very creative, clever, and entertaining! Carol will love it... cheers, Jack

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 10:40:00 PM
    Ohh, you have that gift, Jon -you held the reader's interest. Entertaining. What would a girl do on a cold night except reading your poem? :) Love ya, Toquyen

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 1:32:00 PM
    Hmmmm... Hmmmm...This poem is Troll-ishus... Yum... Yum! LOL!

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:29:00 PM
    Ha,hahahahaha....I love it! "The Great Annual Troll Lake Clambake" I think I might have been to one of those? Ha,ha Great write my friend... (mail)

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 8:28:00 PM
    I really liked this. It reminds me of the cremation of sam mcgee... maybe the wit? ;) Yeah, the wit. As far as more, don't ask why, just say why not! Thanks for your comments on my haiku, by the by. I haven't written it YET as another form. It's one of those moments, you know, when you see one thing and then BOOM something hits you, a similarity? The night I wrote that, a big cloud covered a lot of stars, but one remained. For whatever reason, the holocaust came to mind. Hiding from darkness.