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I Am Better

 They say I am raffish
And examine what they see.
   They think I am a witch
Stuck in a girl’s flesh.
   They compare me to an Aries
Honest, that is what I am.
   They look at me refusing
As if there was no more to know.
   They believe I am not with them
And this makes me sigh.
   They talk in a primitive manner
But they fuel me, feed me. 
   They want me to leave
I do not matter.
   They make me so pleased
As above them I fly.

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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 11:03:00 PM

    ‡ I Like This. 'As Above Them I Fly.' Tis Somewhat Intriguing Given The Brush Leading Unto Its Surprise Ending One Might Consider, Sweet Beautiful Liva. Actually, I Love The Beauty I Find Amid This Verse; You Paint A Very Lovely Picture From Within, One's Perceptions ? 'Happy Thankgiving.' My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 11:02:00 AM

    wonderful write let them waste time criticizing,your heading to the top girl,lol,keep going LIVA

    Nagle Avatar Liva Nagle Date: 12/31/2012 4:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Got to have some confidence! Thank you, and I wish you happiest New Year! :)