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Smoking Woman

Half naked near a window Smoking cigarettes She wafts smoke into the air Inhaling some hits She looks out the glass Noticing me looking in She smokes more with sass
Russell Sivey Form Seguidilla

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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 1:39:00 PM

    well written scene of poetic art .. great visual imagery conveying the sass so well Russell luv .. enjoyed my friend .

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 7:16:00 AM

    It is pretty hard to look away from a beautiful woman, as with your poem it can provide both with pleasure.

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 6:47:00 AM

    LOL proud Mary aye! Nice one Russ Have a Happy Thanks giving. LIght & Love

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 5:33:00 AM

    Interesting approach..Somewhat a play on the word smoking as it is used today..Thanks for stopping by..This one should win a contest if an entry in one..Sara