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Through The Eye's Of The Dreamer

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Velvet mist slowly rises
over emerald hills of silk
dripping dew taps in rhythm
as the sun climbs slow

alone fulfilled in God's grace
purest water's wind and turn
as soft bough's roll in poesy
a lilting swift sings

Beyond the Northern Rata
wild fuchsia's vibrant glow
hang in gracious euphony
where moss slowly grows 

as sunlight fades behind clouds
four undaunted Oaks stand strong
as natures teardrops tumble
beautiful the sound 


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Through The Eye's Of The Dreamer



~ Velvet mist slowly rises over emerald hills of silk dripping dew taps in rhythm as the sun climbs slow Alone fulfilled in God's grace purest water's wind and turn as soft bough's roll in poesy a lilting swift sings Beyond the Northern Rata the wild fuchsias vibrant glow hang in gracious euphony where moss slowly grows As sunlight fades behind clouds four undaunted Oaks stand strong as natures teardrops tumble beautiful the sound ~ Poet-Rick Parise Contest-Natural Dodoitsu 11-20-12

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  1. Date: 1/12/2013 9:12:00 PM
    so gorgeous these were!! Congrats on the well deserved win, Rick.

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 12:11:00 PM
    Rick, ( still waiting on my hello kitty poem ) Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 9:58:00 PM
    RICK, .. I'm here to offer support In Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu ” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 10:11:00 AM
    This is a wonderful use of vocabulary and images to paint the landscape Rick!

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 10:15:00 PM
    Well done Rick. ...Seren

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 8:34:00 PM
    Well done Rick and congratulations on your win. One of my favorites. Love, joyce

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 6:40:00 PM
    Beautiful poem here Rick!Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 4:45:00 PM
    Great descriptive and creative winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 4:00:00 PM
    Wonderful and beautiful piece,Rick...Congrats on your superb win in this contest...

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:53:00 PM
    You have a real knack for these I loved verse 3 & 4 best. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:18:00 PM
    Congratulations on your fantastic win! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:43:00 PM
    Wonderful images and congratulations .... Thanks for sharing this beauty here....mehnaz

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:04:00 PM
    Congratulations Rick on your winning spot xx

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 9:00:00 AM
    Beautiful imagery here Rick.Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 3:11:00 PM
    Just dreamy fav line [ Beyond the Northern Rata/the wild fuchsias vibrant glow/hang in gracious euphony/where moss slowly grows ]Happy Thanksgiving Light & Love