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Naive Heart

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Naive Heart

My heart says
You too are anguished for me
An illusion
Presumptuous day dreaming
Of my ever naïve heart


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  1. Date: 12/21/2012 9:50:00 PM

    Mohammad Yamin, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin Date: 12/22/2012 10:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks PD for your thoughtful wishes. I reciprocate the same. I wish you a very Merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous New Year. May your creativity and flow of pen grow from strength to strength in 2013 and after. Love
  1. Date: 12/13/2012 9:00:00 AM

    This is really beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Many blessings. Lucilla

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin Date: 12/14/2012 11:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for admiring my Tanka Lucilla. I am overjoyed. Happy Christmas season
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 7:07:00 PM

    very romantic! Light & Love

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin Date: 12/2/2012 1:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your very kind comments, Debbie. My wife says I shouldn't be writing romantic poetry at my age. I am in a dilema.
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 12:51:00 PM

    Oh for a naive heart, those days are long . Love this Mohammad xx

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin Date: 12/2/2012 12:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Mandy for your enchanting comments on my Tanka. It is really encouraging. Love
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 8:38:00 PM

    Mohammad, i never listen to my heart.. maybe i should... NAH... LOL... your poem is wonderful. love the good sounding beat coming from your young heart.. luv~ LINDA

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin Date: 12/2/2012 12:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your enchanting comment Linda. Am I again day dreaming or you really wrote 'young heart'? Love and best wishes
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 3:30:00 PM

    wonderful write Mohammad

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin Date: 11/27/2012 7:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for admiring my Tanka, Richard
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 2:59:00 PM

    ah, the naive heart. Sounds like a very sweet heart!

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin Date: 11/27/2012 6:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I admire your high sensitivity, Andrea
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 6:28:00 PM

    Naive heart..great topic for a tanka! [Hi Mohammad..in my haiku it is called a Praying Mantis ;) for the way it holds its arms appears as if in prayer BUT THANKS I so appreciate you reading my writesa thank carefully!] Light & Love

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin Date: 11/27/2012 1:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am glad you like my Tanka. Thanks for clarifying the word praying. How naive of me. Love
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:10:00 PM

    Your heart is full of kindness - a very well written poem Mohammad. - Wishing you a lovely and relaxing weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin Date: 11/23/2012 5:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am overjoyed to read your heartwarming comments on my Tanka. No thank you will be enough. Love
  1. Date: 11/21/2012 5:18:00 AM

    Yes, some are naive all there lives for one reason or another..Sometimes life opens eyes very early for some with some bad results..Enjoyed reading this expressive work this morn..Thanks for stopping by..The fields today are ripe or the most ripe unto harvest but the laborers are few..The cotton just hangs upon the plant waiting for the workers to show up..Sara

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin Date: 11/21/2012 6:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for visiting my Tanka and your educative comments as always. I sometimes read them many times to reach their depth. This is why I wanted you to read my book and favour me with your views. I have an appointment with the Ambassador of Pakistan this Monday. During the meeting I'll present a copy of my book to her whatever be its worth.