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sublime

A golden star coruscates from a turquoise blue sky sparkling on lush green meadows where birds, bees delight on blossoms, fragrant and bright. the breeze spins a symphony with birds fluttering with glee and as dusk descends the sun daub's elysium with shades of pink, stars appear glittering near crescent moon in welkin velvet.
yasmin khan 20/11/2012 contest title"Natural Dodoitsu"

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  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:11:00 AM

    Yasmin, love your win~Yours truly *SKAT

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 8:39:00 AM

    Another well deserved win Yasmin!!

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 8:56:00 AM

    Indeed the perfect title for a perfect poem!! Sublime!! :) Congratulations, Yasmin!!

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 8:59:00 PM

    Yasmin, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 9:30:00 PM

    wonderful imagery, Yasmin. you are right nearby my flowered fields poem on the list!! Congrats, dearie. Hope all is well for you!

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 12:17:00 PM

    Yasmin, , congratulations with your awesome win. SKAT

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 10:02:00 PM

    YASMIN, .. I'm here to offer support In Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu ” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 10:40:00 AM

    Many congrats on your win Yasmin

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 10:30:00 PM

    Yasmin congratulations ....Seren

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 6:31:00 PM

    Excellent imagery here Yasmin.Congrats on your win in the contest.

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:42:00 PM

    Congratulations on your fantastic win, Yasmin! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 1:17:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Yasmin sweetie xx

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 9:59:00 PM

    Happy thanksgiving. I enjoyed and am thankful for this natural beauty.

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 4:21:00 PM

    Just lovely Yassie should be a winner! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 8:37:00 AM

    hey, girl, your flowered poems are also wonderful to read. Love these!!! My son is here for Thanksgiving with his wife, and you should see baby Emery. he is a DOLL!!!

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 3:14:00 PM

    a awesome poem of flowing colours, set within nature. this is beautiful

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 12:21:00 PM

    Yas, very smooth with a great colour and flow...David

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 11:22:00 AM

    Another beauty Yasmin you do have a phenomenal dictionary in your head. xx

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 10:44:00 AM

    Yasmin, this is such a stunning poem for Russell's contest. Lovely. Luv, Gail