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the scars from the ancient war with no men

left on the face of the ones who had fought
are the scars  from the claws of sin,
as it begins  to sting from the memory,
they think back to their heavenly God.
faded deep scars all over their bodies
hidden by what shows on their face
standing there in the lines to battle
no one knows how they could get hurt,
all they know is they did get hurt
living in the shadow of the batallion,
are the ones who let it exist,
though they stand as one person
others see them as a single machine
the scars left on the face 
of the angels, is from 
the ancient war with no men
when that war is over,
count yourself lucky
they stood up and fought.

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  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:21:00 AM

    nice try , write on other topics too.

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 7:01:00 AM

    a Holy war? hmmm.... hugs, catie :)

    Kaler Avatar Jesse Kaler Date: 11/20/2012 5:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes a holy war catie glad u saw it