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About This Poem

Ripples of the water

Watch the ripples of the water
The trickles sounding  like laughter
As pebbles tickle its flow

Pools of delight with crabs inside
Limpets clinging on against the tide
Children's faces aglow

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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 12/7/2012 10:59:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Seren. Love Carol
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 12/4/2012 4:58:00 PM
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    Seren., ;-) congratulations in Susan's "Favorite tail rhyme, past or present contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA
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    craig cornish
    Date: 12/4/2012 2:20:00 PM
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    Love your writes Seren, Congrats on your well deserved win in Susan’s contest!
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 12/4/2012 1:30:00 PM
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    Big Big Congratulations my little Welsh Leek . well done xx
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 12/4/2012 9:43:00 AM
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    congrats Seren on a lovely write and win luv ..

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/4/2012 1:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Linda....Seren
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/4/2012 7:51:00 AM
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    Lovely, congrats!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/4/2012 1:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Richard.....Seren
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 11/21/2012 2:25:00 PM
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    Lovely remnant of summer picture! fav line [Limpets clinging on against the tide] Happy Thanksgiving Light & Love

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/21/2012 5:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Debbie, i can remember then being impossible to move... Seren
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 11/21/2012 1:47:00 PM
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    What a lovely tail rhyme you have done here it's nearly as good as that pencil sketch you did o f my son which I may post as a blog lol xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/21/2012 1:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the compliment ( i think it was) lol, you trying to embarrass me ....Seren
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    kash poet
    Date: 11/20/2012 10:26:00 AM
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    Very nice Tail rhyme by you here Seren!Best wishes for the contest.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/20/2012 10:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Kash Poet