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Doomed Now

I learned Jason passed away
at four o’clock on the way.
My worries rushed to the fore hot,
doomed now, for he owed me a lot!



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  1. Date: 11/19/2012 11:30:00 AM

    Junate too late now...David

    Ersal Avatar Junate Ersal Date: 11/19/2012 1:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Really :)
  1. Date: 11/19/2012 11:21:00 AM

    I gues this is kinda funny, in a morbid way... I like it! Terry (& thanks for your kind words)

    Ersal Avatar Junate Ersal Date: 11/19/2012 1:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's kind of tragicomic. As for the words, You already deserve more than them :)