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Haiku

at the poets grave

sixteen daughters mourn

torrential rain

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  1. Ainsley Avatar
    Michael Ainsley
    Date: 4/4/2013 10:53:00 PM
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    I came back for another look . THI S IS REALLY NICE. ! am off to bed ITs' one am .oooxxx Michael .
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    Poetic Justice
    Date: 1/1/2013 11:00:00 PM
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    I can feel the sadness through your words good poem - JH
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 12/2/2012 2:06:00 PM
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    an intense visual Catie .. hope u r well .. why did u remove all your precious poems luv?
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    binibining P.iNk
    Date: 11/29/2012 11:17:00 PM
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    You make me wonder here, somehow I think the number 16 has some kind of significance here--- what a touching scene you have painted here-- how are you Catie? I hope you are doing well...you are in my thoughts. Hugs to you.
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    harry horsman
    Date: 11/24/2012 9:33:00 AM
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    again a wonderful heartfelt poem from you,,,even in this short form of poetry, your message echos...
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 11/23/2012 8:46:00 AM
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    Catie...hope you are enjoying the holidays... good haiku...pd
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    Ruben O.
    Date: 11/22/2012 12:25:00 PM
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    So sad...A big hug.
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    James Marshall Goff
    Date: 11/19/2012 8:25:00 AM
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    I understand....hi Catie, thanks for holiday wishes...back atcha!
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 11/19/2012 5:53:00 AM
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    Hey Catie-Did rest knowing their actions do NOT reflect on you, only your actions do, when you speak to they and they start up just say "I love you all & I can't talk to you about this, goodbye for now." Don't even given them the opportunity to go ..on & on in your ear! XXXooo Tonight call if you like hon. Light & Love

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 11/19/2012 5:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, deb. love and hugs, catie :)
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 11/19/2012 4:30:00 AM
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    ‡ I Forgot To Take My Medications The Night Before Yesterday, And I Had An Illusional Delusional Experience Which Sometimes Happens When I Fail Or Rebel Against Doing Those Things That I Should, Sweet Beautiful Catie! Sorry About This, But I Do Love Your Beauty, As Also Your Exceptional And Extremely Lovely Poetry. This Is An Intriguing Haunting Yet Beautiful Haiku. Beautiful In The Sense Of Heartful Colours. Also, Thank You, For Your Undeserved Yet, More Than Joyful Visit! Happy Holiday. My Love, Always, Rachel *

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 11/19/2012 6:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh, Rachel, no problem. Again, I am sorry if I have offended you in any way. love and hugs, Catie :)
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 11/18/2012 3:46:00 PM
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    It's the side of poets that has to be written. Well done Hun. Hugs Michael
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    SCRIBE ML
    Date: 11/18/2012 2:34:00 PM
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    I agree with Anne! I'm no Ku expert, but this is powerful wording! The creator just loaned them to us...

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 11/18/2012 2:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Marlon. hugs, catie :)
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/18/2012 1:26:00 PM
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    So sad....but well written Catie. - Have a nice Sunday afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise

    Lindsey Avatar Catie Lindsey Date: 11/18/2012 1:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much, Anne Lise. I hope your Sunday is nice too. hugs, Catie :)