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THE WOMAN WHO WOULDN'T LISTEN TO HER HUSBAND

THE WOMAN WHO WOULDN'T LISTEN TO HER HUSBAND

She would not think the way he did
How could one be so very bright 
Give all her passion to a cause
How could she have such skewered sight

He tried maneuver her with love
He tried to shout a bit and then
He thought he’d slap some sense in her
That’s when she left and said AMEN.

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  1. Date: 11/18/2012 1:33:00 PM

    lol, good for her! Love your writes on mismatched couples, my friend. Hope you're having a great weekend : )

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 1:10:00 PM

    Good end to a bad start! Terry (& good poem, pointed)

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 6:49:00 AM

    Hi there you are missing a word on you first line second stanza (he tried to ma..) good one xx

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 5:22:00 AM

    Victoria you tell them...David

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 5:10:00 AM

    good one Victoria, that's telling 'em

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 10:07:00 PM

    ‡ LOL, Luckily I'll Never Find Myself In Such A Situation, Sweet Beautiful Victoria, Being With A Man I Mean! Yet, I Surely Can Understand Any Relationship Falling Apart Behind The Coldness In Physical Violence ? Great Poe !nd Hopefully She Shall Find A Love Which Shall Caress Her Precious Heart Instead Of Spitting Upon It. Happy Holidays. My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 9:23:00 PM

    ha love the title... good ending,,, no telling what else could have happened in such a case... xox~pd