Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
 

deep dreams

Christopher Pitts Avatar    Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled deep dreams which was written by poet Christopher Pitts. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Christopher Pitts

Best Christopher Pitts Poems

+ Fav Poet

deep dreams

deep beneath the ivory dome
pools of bending colors show

lashing out into the air
all around have stopped to stare

paint their faces to the sky
weaving out an endless lie

dripping down to blind their sight
weave them all into the night

the hazy fog obscures the view
all colors seem to start anew. 


Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 7:52:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super placement in Michael's "Deep Dreams" contest Christopher. I am sorry this is late. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 11:32:00 AM

    Wonderful write. And I see from others congratulatory remarks that is was a winner. I can see why.

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:06:00 PM

    Very descriptive and expressive winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:56:00 PM

    Christopher, congratulations!;-) With your "deep dream" win in Michael's awesome contest. Good night~PD

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:58:00 AM

    Congratulations! I especially love the fourth couplet. Great job!

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:10:00 AM

    Congrad's on Your Win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:06:00 AM

    Congratulations Christopher xx

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:47:00 AM

    Congrats my friend on your win my Deep Dream contest... Michael

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:46:00 AM

    congratulations Christopher...Seren