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Towards Our Love

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Towards Our Love

Leave your fake hill 
And come with me 
To my dream mountain 
Of ecstasy.
Engrave your name 
On every stone 
That builds every part
around my untouched heart.

Leave your house of uncertainty
And come with me 
To my large castle of belief
And just believe,
Believe in me,
Believe in us,
In every step we could take,
Towards the truth, 
Towards the reality,
Towards our love. 

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  1. Date: 11/23/2012 4:52:00 PM
    Very sweet journey you have taken us on Omneya, very well penned. Blessings ,Carl

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 10:15:00 PM
    Beautiful write! I like the title "Towards Our Love", it shows that the journey is ongoing and the destination is well clear in mind. I also like how you said 'Leave your fake hill', it foretells of better options to be realized if the one just took a chance and believed. Very well penned Omneya! Nice!

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 6:23:00 AM
    Ahh!!Very passionate...Who would not come to your castle..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 4:31:00 PM
    A very uplifting imagery dear Omneya."to my large castle of belief..".You amazes me with your brilliant poetic pen,a true romantic writer you are dear friend:-) Love~Arild

    Kamal Avatar Omneya Kamal
    Date: 11/21/2012 6:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Arild for your lovely encouraging comments! Have a great day dear Poet friend and thanks for always stopping by, Love Omneya
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 3:45:00 PM
    Beautful and believable.

    Kamal Avatar Omneya Kamal
    Date: 11/21/2012 6:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanksss Ndaba!:) Glad you liked the Poem, Love, Omneya
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 3:42:00 PM
    Very positive piece on how the road of love can be seen... you are a wonderful poet... and your comments on my "Poetic Tears" were so sweet and appreciated.. hugs Michael

    Kamal Avatar Omneya Kamal
    Date: 11/21/2012 6:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Micheal, So glad you liked this Poem, Thanks for stopping by, Have a great day, Omneya