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Abso-Bloomin-Lutely

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Abso-Bloomin-Lutely

Abso-bloomin-lutely I'm yours
Till the sky turns a pale shade of brown
When pollution sucks the air from my lungs
Won't feel like being a clown

Abso-bloomin-lutely I'm yours
Till the evergreens curl up and die
When all the rivers are flowing with sludge
No laughter will come from this guy

Abso-bloomin-lutely I'm yours
Till the mountains are no longer pristine
When cities are swimming in filth and debris
And wildlife is no longer seen

Abso-bloomin-lutely I'm yours
Till this life no longer exists
And we all just slowly fade into obscurity
Know what, we won't be missed!

© Jack Ellison 2012



Forgive me... not my usual upbeat happy stuff this time around!

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  1. Date: 11/20/2012 10:26:00 AM
    Don't worry... We're here to lean upon.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 11/20/2012 3:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Abso-bloomin-lutely!!!
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:14:00 AM
    I like this side of you as well. Even with a darker topic humor is firmly entrenched.

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/17/2012 8:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, except I will be indoors at work.
    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 11/17/2012 7:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Can't get away from it I guess! LOL As I said to Jon, now back to the sillies! Cheers, have a great west coast day!
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 6:23:00 AM
    "Abso-bloomin-lutely" fun poem. And I loved the last line.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 11/17/2012 6:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A little off track for me... was watching a Natgeo program on where we were all headed if some changes weren't made! Now back to the sillies!