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About This Poem

Poetic Angel

Seventy three miles
if this ancient crow could fly...
in search of a Rose.

Seventy three miles
if this ancient crow could fly....
just a chance to glance.

Seventy three miles
if this ancient crow could fly...
two black coffees please.

Harry J Horsman 2012

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    Angel Simon
    Date: 12/25/2012 10:17:00 AM
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    wish you a wonderful Christmas season... Remember the sacred BIRTH of Christ amidst your noble MIRTH... thanks for stopping by my poems... Love... Angel
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 11/19/2012 12:53:00 AM
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    lovely thoughts of sweet journey to catch the rose of your heart Harry luv .. thankxx for your very sweet comments to me .. wishing u and Elaine a blessed Thanksgiving ..
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 11/18/2012 6:37:00 PM
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    Harry, thanks for the comments you left me today. I don't have much time to be here, but want you to know I will be searching for some oldies of yours when I can. and hopefully by tomorrow you will have some new poems up. Keep up your writing. it keeps you young!!
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    Sukmawati Komala
    Date: 11/18/2012 5:58:00 PM
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    you send me a big smile this morning Harry,,,thank you enjoy your pen here.... all the best <3 <3 <3 SK
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 11/18/2012 4:04:00 PM
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    I agree with below comments. Made me smile. That's the joy of poetry. Well done my friend. Michael
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 11/18/2012 2:09:00 PM
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    Ahhh!!Romantic work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by ...Sara
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    HGarvey Daniel Esquire
    Date: 11/18/2012 12:59:00 PM
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    Dear Harry, I like how YOU used the First two lines in each Senryu I wrote a senryu where I used the last line as the first of the next Senryu Superb Pen LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry I have been reading Mandy "The Golden Girl"'s" POETRY and reading YOUR many Graceful Comments I was wondering if YOU knew YOU made no Comment on her Poem "Ode to Brenda"...HG
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    jack horne
    Date: 11/18/2012 11:59:00 AM
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    lovely write here, my friend. Congrats on your wins : )
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/18/2012 10:56:00 AM
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    There appears to be an epidemic of crows flying about. Coffee seems a poor substitute for a rose, perhaps that jolt of caffeine will be just what you need to gap the distance to your rose. As allways Harry, very much enjoyed your flight!
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    Larisa Rzhepishevska
    Date: 11/18/2012 10:41:00 AM
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    It's really great. I learn so much reading your poems. Thank you.
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    Owen Yeates
    Date: 11/18/2012 10:14:00 AM
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    Hi Harry great senryu love it, all the best Owen
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 11/18/2012 6:51:00 AM
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    hi there soup mail xx
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 11/17/2012 9:34:00 PM
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    Such a very lovely poem, Harry! it makes me smile. Thank you for sharing and all the best always! love/hugs, Leonora
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    Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 11/17/2012 7:15:00 PM
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    WOW! Awesome piece here!! Love the ending especially. Very nice senyrus indeeed. ;) Always, Laura
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    SCRIBE ML
    Date: 11/17/2012 5:36:00 PM
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    I didn't see the ending coming, lol. Good piece! I was feeling the sentiment, then just smacked me.
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    Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 11/17/2012 3:43:00 PM
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    I like this. Just close your eyes and you'll be there. No sugar in the coffee. I like mine sweet with cream. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 11/17/2012 2:12:00 PM
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    someones honey is 73 miles away? [peer] Light & Love
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 11/17/2012 1:39:00 PM
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    oh my, it ended FUNNY. Love this, Harry!!!
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    Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 11/17/2012 10:58:00 AM
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    Splendid poem Harry! If I had wings I would be heading southbound by now..brrrr! Have a great weekend
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    Anne Currin
    Date: 11/17/2012 10:27:00 AM
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    Make mine a chai latte please ;) another sensational write, Henry!
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    David Williams
    Date: 11/17/2012 10:15:00 AM
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    Harry I like this but make mine a cappucino please....David
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    bl devnath
    Date: 11/17/2012 9:49:00 AM
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    Last lines are wonderful, carry possibilities, perhaps. Enjoyed my sweet friend. Thanks for all the comments on my write. Loved always, bl
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/17/2012 7:41:00 AM
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    Harry .... lovely!! - Have a relaxing weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 11/17/2012 6:59:00 AM
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    Wow that says something to someone, gonna get a map out xx


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