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About This Poem

Twin Souls

Two hearts living
Heading into the future
Two souls blossoms
Product of a spring

Tickle,tickle your mind
Splendid days spent in the sunshine
Feel so free,so out of trouble
Days without the everyday struggle

Two hearts living
Built on a dream of love and hope
Two souls living like free spirits
Grown into eachother like twin-souls

A.Ertsland

November 17th 2012

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    yasmin khan
    Date: 4/26/2013 2:50:00 AM
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    Soup mail
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    Dinda Minardi
    Date: 4/13/2013 11:47:00 AM
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    oh my god. this is really sweet, Arild. What a ticklish love. thx for ur visit on my page, dear. have a great weekend. :)
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    Date: 12/21/2012 10:12:00 PM
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    Arlid, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 12/2/2012 2:45:00 PM
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    Nice to read your work today fav line [ grown into each other like twin souls]Light & Love
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 11/24/2012 5:19:00 PM
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    That is the way that it should be ..When one cries the other should be able to taste salt..Enjoyed reading ..Thanks for stopping by..Could you hear and feel the song incorporated into the lyrics?...Sara
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    Date: 11/21/2012 8:03:00 PM
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    Hello ArlidStopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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    harry horsman
    Date: 11/21/2012 3:58:00 PM
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    wow this is so heartfelt Arild, a stunning poem...
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 11/19/2012 12:15:00 PM
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    i go goeey over this, arild... ahah, is this for anne?.. you enchamt me with the sweetness and beauty of this piece... Great job; have a fruity day!..:) huggs
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    jack horne
    Date: 11/18/2012 11:56:00 AM
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    love this beautiful write, Arild
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    Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 11/17/2012 11:39:00 PM
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    awesome poem my friend Arild. I like it. thanks for sharing and thanks for dropping by on my poem. A blessed day to you always!! Love, Maria
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    Date: 11/17/2012 7:31:00 PM
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    Arlid, love the image feeling and wonder... LOL...I'm wondering if you are talking about me and Nathan... <---- cute cute... tickle tickle... Love this poem. Well, we are like one, not even twins.. You see, he is my other half... LOL... the wrong one... he he he... I guess we are building our dreams on love and restaurant money.. <---JK.. hope~ I better stop now, , I love making everything about me.. You see that is how I get by... ;-) ;-).... xox~pd
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    Richard Palmer
    Date: 11/17/2012 5:12:00 PM
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    nicely written Arild
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    Catie Lindsey
    Date: 11/17/2012 5:04:00 PM
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    a very beautiful poem, Arild. loved it. hugs, catie :)
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 11/17/2012 4:19:00 PM
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    You are romantic writer my friend... just stopping back to send a hug back from my Rosanna... she says thank you.....
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    Omneya Kamal
    Date: 11/17/2012 3:48:00 PM
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    Arild, This poem is just so lovely! I really like it I just feel it's really related my newest Poem " Towards our love" Good job my poet friend, Have a great day, Omneya
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    Kim Merryman
    Date: 11/17/2012 3:46:00 PM
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    A lovely write, Arild! So sweet! Love, Kim
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 11/17/2012 2:46:00 PM
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    So nice to see you up and writing again my friend... hope you and all around you are good... handshake across the sea to you my brother.. Michael

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/18/2012 5:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    back at ya`mike! keep that lovely woman next to you warm and safe:)
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 11/17/2012 1:49:00 PM
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    So sweet, Sounds like gemini rising! yep, you and me both, let's bring out the chocolates.

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/17/2012 1:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yay! let`s have a chocolate party:-) only full addictive folks allowed:-)
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    SCRIBE ML
    Date: 11/17/2012 1:16:00 PM
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    TWO BEAUTIFUL PEOPLE DESERVE ONE ANOTHER! You two have a treasure in one another. You leave a good taste in my mouth when I read your work! Well Done!

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/17/2012 1:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for that very nice comment,Poet Linton!!
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    Anne Currin
    Date: 11/17/2012 11:03:00 AM
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    This is very well written! I love the concept. Very nicely done!

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/17/2012 1:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks for your lovely comment Anne;-)
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    Toquyen Harrell
    Date: 11/17/2012 9:39:00 AM
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    Beautiful, Arild. I am so happy for both of you. That is the way it should be. Love ya, Toquyen

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/17/2012 1:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Love ya`tooo!:-)
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    David Williams
    Date: 11/17/2012 8:00:00 AM
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    Arild my friend oh how I have missed being here among friends, I love this piece of yours it is just how life and love should be for all, you and Anne Lise have a great weekend...Dave

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/17/2012 2:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    have missed your poems and presence here at Soup,David! Its good to see you around the writers table again my friend!!
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    Laila Andresen Mjelde
    Date: 11/17/2012 6:22:00 AM
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    Yes I will be the first to comment your poem !!!! lol ;0) I liked your poem, it was a good poem! big hug from me Laila ;0)

    Ertsland Avatar Arild Andresen Ertsland Date: 11/17/2012 7:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    YAY!!!:-) hugs right back at ya`~


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