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The King's Shilling


From factories and fields they came
Men and boys from each neighbourhood
Giving their lives, in the king’s name
Filled with pride, in long queue’s they stood
Unknown to them to give their blood
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In foreign lands to free oppressed
In khaki coloured battle dress.
Enemies fighting tooth and nail
To be the victor they obsessed 
In muddy fields where horrors hail!
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As winter comes and bones are chilled
with choking dust and heavy gun.
In rabbit warrens lots were killed.
Enemy shells dropped by the tonne
Ends the life of a mother’s son
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Deafening noise prevented sleep
As in their hands loved one’s they keep
Onto each other they did hold;
A shilling’s wage it was so cheap
For six months work as they were told
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As time went on and still at war
So many men were filled with shock
From sights of death and blood and gore
Unrecognised… a mental block
No time to heal and then take stock
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As trains arrived with coffins deep
From silent homes they came like sheep.
Too young or old to be enrolled.
Supporting  mother’s as they weep
For long lost sons who were so bold.

© 29/8/2012

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  1. Date: 1/20/2013 4:42:00 AM

    Wonderful poem David... unfortunately, somebody (we) let the horror and the futility go on and on and on... Terry

    Williams Avatar David Williams Date: 1/20/2013 5:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    how true...
  1. Date: 1/6/2013 10:11:00 AM

    Hi David... stopping by to say hi....Tex

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 3:09:00 PM

    Lovely Poem, loved everything about it.

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 11:49:00 AM

    This one is a rare find. It is very well penned, with a good rhyme and flow. It has the power to transport me to the moment. Good job!

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 9:41:00 PM

    wow, some HEAVY stuff, but VERY well written!! If it's all dizain form, that is amazing. One of your best! I can't believe i did not see it yet. It seems a bit familiar to me. Maybe I read someone else who had done a similarly magnificent poem against war.

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 6:43:00 AM

    Such a touching and real description of war that takes our best to do the worst, as is said. Too sad...but an excellent verse in Dizian form with brilliant flow and superb use of language. Well done David!

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 8:08:00 AM

    Very touching in content and captivating in composition is this write, David, hope all is getting well, !! Jag

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 1:25:00 AM

    Hey, you did great with this dizain, David. "In foreign lands to free oppressed/ In khaki coloured battle dress." -- flows very well. The last stanza was a strong finish for sure, including all the possible emotional turmoils of the "too young or old to be enrolled", as they supported mourning mothers. I have been terrible lately with leaving comments with people....any comments. Since you are hanging out on the Soup, I am ass.uming your wife is doing better, which is nice to 'see'! Sincerely.

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 3:29:00 PM

    here at last, and a wonderful moving poem this is David...written as it was, and reads so poignantly.. hope all is well with you and your wife... glad your back...

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 12:58:00 PM

    sad and touching write dear David .. beautifully expressed luv .. thankxx for commenting on my blog the other day with great ideas and suggestions .. wishing u a happy blessed Thanksgiving ..

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 8:55:00 AM

    What a sad, but beautiful poem. Your last verse summed the poem up nicely. I also thank you fo rreading my latest work.

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 5:29:00 AM

    Very captivating work honoring those who fought, suffered, and some died for their country..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 3:45:00 PM

    Very intense write David, so well described it leaves one to ponder silently with aching heart for lost soldiers, broken families and lost love. Glad you are back among us David, stay strong. xxx vie

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 1:48:00 PM

    love this moving write, David - great to see you posting again. Hope Geraldine continues to improve

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 2:52:00 PM

    WW1 and after bloody ww1 our returning boys, were bloody numb, to walk the roads, with a swag outback, to live on rabbit on the track, half crazed from bomb and gas attack, as crazy seen by some, old soldiers on their rum, when they could get em some, outback... re: Dave Williams excellent "The King's Shilling" Don Johnson

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 11:19:00 AM

    So sadly true, a perfect write for the moment in time we are in..your friend always Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 11:18:00 AM

    A very heartfelt poem by you David.Enjoyed the read.Glad that you are back.

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 11:17:00 AM

    Hi David, love this one xx

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 8:29:00 AM

    Davidoff..missed you, so good to be reading this fantastic epic piece ...you are quite something, you know, I really want to know where you get these brain waves from??

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 7:18:00 AM

    great poem my friend David. Welcome back and I'm happy for you and for your dear wife. thanks for dropping by on my poem. God bless you always!! hugs, Mary (^_^)

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 3:20:00 AM

    Welcome back, friend. Hope things are improving on the home front. Enjoyed this profound piece, God be with you!! Jag

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:49:00 PM

    David, it is nice to know you are back... love the story, and dizain form you have here. Nice to see you did not start out with a small thought... love this.. TEX

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 4:39:00 PM

    Wow David - U r definitely here ...and you have not held back with this poem congratulations on a very well thought out and constructed poem.....its like you have written this from the spirit of those who have been there and passed on.

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 1:35:00 PM

    What a way to return to the Soup, Mr. Williams!...Racking my brain trying to figure out who this David is...well done and welcome back, my friend!...I hope your wife's health is improving daily - Tim

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 12:48:00 PM

    So good to see a poem posted by you with such emotion and talent. Welcome back David. God bless. Hugs, Gail

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 11:39:00 AM

    A GRAND RETURN POET!....the rhyme woven into this truth, is David at his best! Talented penned this!

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 10:51:00 AM

    Wow the power behind your cleverly laid out words my friend! I am so impressed with the quill you have written this poem with! You have masterfully written a grandiose and spectacular piece here David! What a intriguing poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 10:28:00 AM

    A spectacular poem my friend,one that went straight to my emotions! And its a blessing in itself to be reading your work again David.Good to have you online again! Have a peaceful and blessed weekend..Arild

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 9:57:00 AM

    a life for a shilling....tragic....well penned David

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:39:00 AM

    Well hello my Poet friend... so nice to reading you here today.. Hope life is more peaceful for you these days... BTW excellent piece you have penned here... Michael

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