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The Camouflage Had Spoken

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The Camouflage Had Spoken

You said there was a miss when I dwell within your recesses
You said there was a timeless when we ran into a quest

Chanting soul written on the piece of paper
As I believed lost be spoken bluntly in its verses
Chanted the insecurity
Uttered solely within the gust of melancholy

You say we are the world
We are the future and past
Camouflage finally revealed by the courtesy silence of yours

Your words which dispossessed by reality and not materialize  by the time
Your words which led to nothing but vain on a rhyme

Now we simply deprecated
Like dusts rippled on a flat surface atop the old album

As easy as it forgotten by you
To forget about who you are, who I am
To forget about the holder of the past
And now the throne is all yours

If time willingly to sacrifice its seconds
And roll back its ages wheels to the day of my times
I'd grab the vision where I stood and gazed upon this time


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                                                   3rd PLACE                                                  
                                               November's poem
                                      Contest Judged:  11/26/2012
                                    Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A

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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 1:14:00 PM
    Congratulations on your "November Poem" contest win Yanny. Love, Carol

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/3/2012 3:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Carol, your comment is always uplifting :)
  1. Date: 11/29/2012 6:00:00 PM
    a well crafted poem that you put a lot of thought into, Yanny. Congrats on the big win.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/3/2012 3:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Andrea, you make my day :D
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 2:49:00 PM
    Hey...first time reading your work! Congrats on this personifying piece! Keep working on that beautiful English! WOW! gwendolen

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/27/2012 4:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you gwendolen, it's a pleasure for having you too in here, i'm going to check your page too after this :)-Hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:02:00 AM
    Wow! You really write so well and a great poem indeed my dear Yanny! I love it and I extremely enjoy reading it tonight. My huge hearty congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend! Cheers! thank you so much also for your precious time reading my poems, your wonderful comments and congratulations. All the best and luck always! love and hugs, Leonora

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/27/2012 4:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you leonara, you are really delighten my day by stopping by and leaving some lovely comment :D,wishing you a wonderful day :)-Hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 1:37:00 AM
    Big congratulations on your winning place Yanny, hugs xx

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/27/2012 2:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Mandy,it's been a pleasure to have a greeting by you :D
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 9:39:00 PM
    Yanny, . Congratulations :-) with your winning poem.. Thank you for the awesome NOVEMBER'S poem entry..always~pd

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/26/2012 10:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you PD, you're really make my day :D- Love&Hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 4:30:00 PM
    Great Poetry.. so much like your style... hugs Michael

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/17/2012 6:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you michael, glad that you like it :) - Hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 12:56:00 AM
    Love it, very well written

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 11/17/2012 3:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Amber, glad that you like it :). Wished you a great holidays ^^- Hug, Yanny