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winter's blanket

The winter blanket is falling all over the field of dreams,
The snowflakes are shining through the sun,as it seems.
My face tingles as the flakes fall on my cold icy face,
They are from heaven,God's special place.
I lay on the ground and watch every falling flake,
I lay here until I start to shake.
I raise up out of the powdered white snow,
I see a rainbow that seems to go and go.
All the beautiful colors that stands out in the beautiful sky,
The sun,the rainbow,the flakes,are here ,but why.
The winters blanket covers my body that is almost froze,
My face is so cold,even my icy nose.
The winters blanket is a silence of mother earth,
To live each moment,a greatness that is really all it's worth.

 by susan simpkins

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  1. Date: 12/4/2012 12:25:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win in Gail Angel's "Winter's Blanket" contest Susan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 1:33:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning place Susan xx

    simpkins Avatar susan simpkins Date: 11/30/2012 3:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks so much,really enjoyed entering the contest ,thanks so much all.
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 12:54:00 AM

    Many congrats for this wonderful win Susan.

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 8:50:00 PM

    Susan, congratulations with your "winter's blanket" poem. A very Good and comforting image in Gail's contest. Goodnight~ always~ PD

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 5:40:00 PM

    Congratulations on your great win, Susan. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 5:20:00 PM

    Awesome work..Congrats on your win.Sara

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 4:17:00 PM

    A lovely winter poem Susan - well done. - Wish you luck in the contest. - Have a relaxing and pleasant weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    simpkins Avatar susan simpkins Date: 11/17/2012 8:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ty,so much
  1. Date: 11/16/2012 2:04:00 PM

    WOW! what a beautiful poem you have written and What a beautiful picture you have painted for all of us to see. I love the snow. thanks for sharing this with us. Lucilla

    simpkins Avatar susan simpkins Date: 11/17/2012 8:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ty,so much