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the young woman

the young woman
ponders life’s hardships
her hair thins quickly

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  1. Date: 1/10/2013 8:01:00 PM

    charles, this is nice to read, but for me it doesn't work as haiku because it is something that would not happen in the moment (the hair thinning part).