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Angel Wings

Angel wings fan across morn's sky.
A light veiled fog floats low
in the vale; cold damp penetrates
to the core; soon inside go_
Not hardly long enough to stay
in the beauty of earth's 
gifts, enjoying blessings present.
Cold porch, inside fire's worth....
Could not stay very long 'pon porch.
Inside's warmth called to me.
If only I could see some more,
I would share it with thee.....

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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 9:27:00 AM

    That is lovely poem, Sara....enjoy reading your work having my coffee this morning.. :) Thank you for taking the time to read my poems Ellie

  1. Date: 11/19/2012 7:39:00 PM

    awww! wonderful! -apoorva do visit my blog if you like to read fiction stories http://fictionworldbyap.blogspot.in/

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 6:27:00 PM

    Vivid imagery! Wonderful write Sara! Hugs

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 12:54:00 PM

    lol, yes, I can imagine your porch getting pretty nippy : )

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 10:07:00 AM

    Hi Sara beautiful but stay warm indoors you earned it with write, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 8:01:00 AM

    Simply Beautiful!!!! luv Michael

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 4:04:00 AM

    What a refreshing beauty you have shared in this lovely write. Just beautiful Sara. I have placed a new Poem in support of PD's fight for Woman's Cancer. Hope you would like to read it. Love and best wishes...Ravindra..Sara Ken

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 3:45:00 AM

    Such a lovely poem about an angel my dear Sara and I enjoy reading it this evening! Thank you so much for sharing and God bless you always! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 11:22:00 PM

    wow, this is beautiful.

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 4:02:00 PM

    Love your poem that is filled with such beauty. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 1:14:00 PM

    This is a truly wonderful and delightful write my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your fantastic and incredible significant poem this afternoon! What a remarkable and outstanding piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 10:04:00 AM

    oh, sara... this gift sends gentle compassion in every splendid line... i feel your heart; a beautiful melody!..:) hugggs

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 9:54:00 AM

    Dear Sara, Very vivid imagery This time of year I love to sit on the porch looking over the valley but the North wind sends me in before my eyes have seen all of Nature's Glory Superb Pen Thank-YOU for YOUR recent Gracious Comments LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR ETERNAL Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 8:06:00 AM

    Oh Sara, this is lovely, i've told you before and i'm telling you again, your poetry is so classically old English, you sure do reach across the pond to me with your poetry....

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 7:36:00 AM

    I can see you shutting the cold out here Sara. Lovely xx

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 7:29:00 AM

    Moving, vivid imagery, Sara... wonderful... Terry

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 7:09:00 AM

    Lovely imagery, Sara. Well crafted verse.