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Half a heart

Who would give up heaven
to just be with me
not when they see inside
its dark and all empty
my only place to hide

I’m alive because I still feel pain
But needing love so much
even having half a heart
I’d hold it inside
and not fall apart

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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 3:38:00 PM

    There is that pain again...Expressed very well. :o)

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 12:46:00 PM

    Great write. I mean that wholeheartedly - JH

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 12:35:00 PM

    ‡ No, I Wouldn't Give Up Heaven, To Be With 'Anyone,' Sweet Beautiful Passionate Andrea. Nor, Would I Ever Ask 'Anyone' To Give Up Heaven To Be With Myself! But Definitely As Most Assuredly The Woman I Am Love, Would Become My Broken Heart If We Did Not Ascend Unto Heaven One Day Together. Tis A Beautiful Joy To Behold Your Splendours Once Again. I Admire How That Your Beauty Reaches Deep Your Heart To Brush Your Reflections. Thank You For Your Sweet Visit. Happy Holidays. My Love, Always, Rachel *