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  1. Date: 11/22/2012 2:46:00 PM

    I can't send code here I will try to do it in your soup mail, the poem is called "Passing On of Little Bee Ojibwat, Thinder Bay" under narrative form [I made up the whole thing after some study..though I would like it to be accurate] THANKS Michael Light & Love

    Guzzi Avatar Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/22/2012 2:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oops you don't get soup mail [fret]
  1. Date: 11/21/2012 5:19:00 PM

    The last lines brings me a sense of sadness, yet this is really a very lovely poem. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 11/21/2012 6:08:00 AM

    Just loved the tone of the write fav line [But, now and oft a finger pulses upon familiarity ] Happy Thanksgiving! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 10:57:00 AM

    Beautiful, the essence of ne'er forgotten innocence adrift. Lost? Perhaps, but carried in the valise of the heart. Enjoyed this very much, Ernest

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 8:32:00 AM

    A nice, nostalgic recollection of spent youth. You aptly re-packaged the memories in a natural mileu. Enjoyed your well-sculpted poem!

    Smith Avatar Michael Smith Date: 11/15/2012 8:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you