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Presence Of Fall

Red Holly berries decorate
the Holly shrub; contrast
waxy deep green leaves, buds pop 'pon
the Tulip Tree amassed.

The Camellia Sasanqua's white
blossoms show just below
the last few golden pears of gold_
Better work than Van Gogh 

Possibly unfinished__

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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 3:02:00 PM

    Lots of color in this sweet poem of fall. Loved the last line.

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 11:08:00 AM

    This is such a brilliant write, maybe unfinished true, but still done very eloquently! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and perfected poem this afternoon! What a special and wondrous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 8:51:00 AM

    Good write :)

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 8:38:00 AM

    Love the natural melange that you have artfully sculpted. You have glossed the holiday with a gilded veil.

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 7:54:00 AM

    ‡ van Gogh, Magnificent Vistas In Vibrant Hues Of Colours His Gifted Brush, Sweet Beautiful Priceless Sara. I Find Your Own Gift In Poetics Verse To As Splendorous As Any Canvas In That His Eyes. They As Most All Inspired Amid Creations Awe In They The Greatest Artist Of Them All. You Paint Sooo Beautifully Sara And Yet A Bards Poetic Palette Allows They To Also Compose At The Very Same Moment. Your Beauty Does It Quite Wonderfully. My Love, Always, Rachel *