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safari ants


safari ants
arrive at the picnic --
clouds darken

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  1. Date: 1/27/2014 7:05:00 PM

    Yes Vicky I enjoyed the imagery, could see the safari ants on a picnic hunt. Thank you for your encouragement.

  1. Date: 1/22/2014 7:23:00 PM

    Very nice indeed with great imagery.Thank you Vicky for your kind comment.

  1. Date: 1/16/2014 9:25:00 AM

    Good morning Vicky, I have missed your visits. I hope all is well with you.

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 10:30:00 PM

    Nice Haiku. Congratulations on your win

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:04:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win in Charles' "Haiku" contest Vicky. I am sorry this is a very late comment. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 7:30:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win! Sorry so late. Great write! Hugs Holly Moore

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 12:45:00 AM

    I LOVE this. BiG congratulations.

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 6:14:00 PM

    I really liked this one..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 6:09:00 PM

    Lookie here! Look who is numero uno WHY YOU! with a haiku! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/24/2012 5:34:00 AM

    Big congratulations on your win Vicky, love this, hugs xx

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:11:00 PM

    Vicky, congratulations with your haiku win,,, take care..pd

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 1:34:00 PM

    Many congrats!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 1:07:00 PM

    We also get the ants swarming when the heavy rain is eminent. Good haiku and congratulations on your 1st place win, Vicky. Love, Su

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 8:41:00 AM

    who needs rain when you have ants?

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 7:17:00 AM

    I feel itchy all of a sudden!

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 6:26:00 AM

    That would put a damper on the picnic..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 11:43:00 PM

    I like the imagery in your Haiku here. Thanks for posting your work for others to see.