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Cried

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Cried


I cried while you were gone.

       		          The        	t
                		          e
                		             a
               		                        r
               		                          s
                                                             	 they	 s t u n g       my cheeks.

       		         It left a trail, a crimson water

                   					                     in a pool of former me.
             And I wallowed in the thought

                                                                    that this is what it is.


     And no   m
                      a
                        t
                          t
                           e
                             r        where I find myself,

                                      The control 	     e v  a   d    e     s    		     my grip.
                                

And I try to fight
                      and fight
                                    and fight.
                                                                      I try to just forget.
                                  

                    The thoughts I find inside my head

               			                                     Are too hard to relive.
   
                               I refuse to be a slave,      
                                                                               to the pauper and the King.

                  			 I lay my weary head    d

                          					             o

                             				                     w
 
                    					                     n
           
          Not ashamed, but struggling.

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  1. Date: 11/15/2012 5:58:00 PM
    Strong feelings expressed well I particularly like how you ended. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:58:00 PM
    Interesting work...Very good design on the page..It has great flow and rhythm to it..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

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    Date: 11/14/2012 5:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much for taking time to read my pieces and give me your feedback, Sara. It really makes me feel welcomed being a "newbie" on here.