under the same umbrella by kash poet


Timothy Hicks Date: 3/24/2013 10:23:00 AM This was a very clever piece and a funny thought. It actually feels similar to my "snowy evening" haiku that you recently read... only in reverse where the forces of nature bring two people to battle things out... instead of finding the things that make you the same... only have read a couple so far but you seem to really understand what makes haiku great.
Carrie Richards Date: 1/5/2013 9:37:00 AM Somehow I missed this one........wow, loved the twist !! Another side of romance, :( but yes.......it happens and you caught it nicely!!
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/3/2012 1:16:00 PM Congratulations on your "November Poem" contest win Kash. Love, Carol
Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/29/2012 6:04:00 PM Kashinath, are you ok? have not heard from you lately. Anyway, seeing this gem of yours on PD's winner list. Congratulations!!
Tim Ryerson Date: 11/27/2012 3:27:00 PM So stop quarrelling and kiss her Kash! (before it stops raining!)...unique take on the subject for sure...congratulations - Tim
Gwendolen R. Date: 11/27/2012 3:02:00 PM Wow...this is the first argument I have read in any of your poems...perhaps part 2 will have a romantic make up moment??...hahaha...Always a treat to read your creations....gwendolen
Leonora Galinta Date: 11/27/2012 9:09:00 AM Many congratulations on your win my dear friend, Kash! love/hugs, Leonora
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/27/2012 1:40:00 AM Congratulations on your winning place Kash xx
Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/26/2012 10:20:00 PM Congrats Kash for your winning haiku, they are gorgeous! :D-Hug, Yanny
Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/26/2012 9:40:00 PM Kash, . Congratulations :-) with your winning poem.. Thank you for the awesome NOVEMBER'S poem entry
Ruben O. Date: 11/22/2012 6:21:00 PM Another great haiku, Kash! The middle line is yelling at me: write a poem... : ) I think Im going to steal that image! Ruben
cory long Date: 11/16/2012 12:23:00 PM Nice picture you paint.. I hate it when that happens take care cory
nette onclaud Date: 11/16/2012 10:08:00 AM the weather brings out the best in you... fantastic 'ku!... come on over, kashi bud!..:) hugggs
elizabeth wesley Date: 11/16/2012 9:56:00 AM Too close for comfort in other words. Probably for the best to have one each. A neat way to divvy up some space. Luv, Lizzie
Linda-Marie SweetHeart Date: 11/16/2012 1:03:00 AM been in that situation Kash luv ..concise view of emotion .. much luck .. great insight too ..wow
Vicky Tsiluma Date: 11/15/2012 10:46:00 PM LOVely Kash! I like how the poem turns to the unexpected. Nice!
Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/15/2012 4:49:00 PM Ahhhh, a different kind of poem on being under an umbrella. CLEVER. oh, and that was so neat about the poem of mine, Kash. I had no idea there was a top 100 list here. Are you on it? Let me go see. I got my pee poem on it too!!!
E. N. Igma Date: 11/15/2012 11:24:00 AM Chuckling. Enjoyed reading your poems today, Ernest
Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/15/2012 6:34:00 AM I like this one, sometimes relationships are like that . Well done.
Rachel St.Cross Date: 11/15/2012 5:23:00 AM ‡ Emotions Life Love These Things, Like Rain, Sometimes, Sweet Precious Kashie. Yet At The End Of It All We Grasp Love's Heart. Thank You For Your Beautiful Priceless Visit. Love Always, Rachel *
ilene bauer Date: 11/14/2012 6:39:00 PM you got me on that one! very clever!
Russell Sivey Date: 11/14/2012 3:24:00 PM Ha ha, oh Kashi, you bring humor to my life with this witty write! I was enamored by the intricate way you spun that poem around! What an elaborate and distinctive piece my friend! I loved this delightful poem, Great Work!!
harry horsman Date: 11/14/2012 2:43:00 PM this is very profound, Kash.. an excellent haiku...
Sara Kendrick Date: 11/14/2012 2:40:00 PM Got a chuckle..Maybe with the closeness all will be okay..Sara
Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/14/2012 2:21:00 PM Very deep poem here Kash, I can feel the emotion flowing. Hugs, Gail
Anne Lise Andresen Date: 11/14/2012 1:41:00 PM Proximity gives heating - Well written kash! Have a relaxing day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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