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The Life Episode

As you shout through the wounds you suffered
Abandoned by people who you thought they may forgotten
Trifled, stumbled, humiliated and rejected by the facts beyond your comprehension
As if things were trapped in the maze of desolation

As you awake from the howl of your sorrow
Rose by the spirit to defeat the day called tomorrow 
Be recognized, steadied, cherished and well received by hard endeavors
All back to the philosophy of "failure is the beginning of a success"

Rejection is the key to the future admission
Fiasco is an establishment of a sweet life lesson
Survival is a necessity, living is a provision
Dare to live, dare to wander in the land of wonder

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  1. Date: 11/14/2012 4:02:00 PM

    Life issues some hard blows sometimes..Great topic about which to write..Enjoyed reading your gifted work..Sara

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/15/2012 8:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Sara, glad that you enjoyed this piece of work :). hopefully you had a great day with it :) - Hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 10:47:00 AM

    ‡ I Shall Live, Far Beyound The Stars, Sweet Beautiful Yanny. Its Truth Shall Have Nothing To Do With 'Anyone' In This Place. I Hear What Your Beauty Is Saying; Wonderful. My Love, Rachel *

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/15/2012 8:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    We decide our own happiness, that's true dear Rachel, but happiness itself need the second role or other parts as stunt men to explore its own essence. And through these winding road, accidentally it finaly found their true identity :) really glad to see you stopped by :), wishing you a great day Rachel - Hug, Yanny
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 10:46:00 AM

    How very true, we all trancend our existance through our trials and tribulations and become more human in the process. Well written and expressed with great emotion. Quite insiteful for someone so young. My guess is that you have already experienced a great deal dispite your short time in this world.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/15/2012 7:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Experience is a great teacher and still it is. I feel very grateful to be part of those scenes. And true that turbulence did make us to become more humanity. You do have a strong instinct :) Thank you to have another visit in this poem :) and wish you a great day :D