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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2012 6:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Craig's "Hope" contest Rebecca. Love, Carol

Kaye S-

Date: 11/28/2012 12:34:00 PM

Reading this has such a calming effect, Rebecca-- how wonderful to have that reassurance, that hope-- something akin to finding some kind of sanctuary, knowing in your heart that all will be well-- yes, God's timing is a mystery but well worth it I believe... thank you for your encouraging words and support, I deeply appreciate it, as well as the hugs-- sorry about the soupmail btw, maybe I'll activate that soon... "inhale hope with each desperate breath"--> wow.

nicole marrier

Date: 11/23/2012 5:53:00 PM

Your poem gives the perfect definition of what hope itself means and stands for. What beautiful words.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2012 9:38:00 PM

hey, your theme is much like the way I did mine, just you took the more positive approach. ME LIKES a lot!!! Congrats on your win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/19/2012 2:55:00 PM

Rebecca.. congratulations with your wonderful win in Craig's contest... always~ PD

Leonora Galinta

Date: 11/19/2012 9:44:00 AM

Great write! Congratulations on your win, Rebecca! love/hugs, LG

Junate Ersal

Date: 11/18/2012 9:26:00 PM

I love it!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/18/2012 6:56:00 PM

the first 4 lines particularly resonanted with me. [line 9 [timeing is or timing's if there is such a word ;) no matter poetic license!] Congrad's on your win in this difficult contest. Light & Love

Becca Lucas Date: 11/18/2012 7:08:00 PM

Thanks, Debbie! Actually, I think it should have been punctuated, "His perfect timing, a mystery" That's how I heard it in my head anyway :D Thanks! Light and love back at ya!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/18/2012 6:17:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your great work..Congrats on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2012 6:15:00 PM

Hey, I don't know which number you got. I can just see that this was on the list. BIG congrats to you. You much deserved it.

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 11/18/2012 5:41:00 PM

CONGRATS REBECCA ON A MESMERIZING WRITE ON HOPE AND AWESOME WIN TOO LUV ..

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/18/2012 5:23:00 PM

Congratulations, loved your poem. Thank you for all your help with this style. I could not have done it without your guidance. You are wonderful!

Joseph May

Date: 11/18/2012 3:15:00 PM

congrats on your win Rebecca

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 11/18/2012 1:16:00 PM

Well done Rebecca!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/18/2012 12:58:00 PM

Congratulations Rebecca, well done this was a hard one xx

Sharon Bell

Date: 11/18/2012 12:20:00 PM

Well done!

craig cornish

Date: 11/18/2012 12:00:00 PM

Rebecca, a really wonderful write perfect to form.

Seren Roberts

Date: 11/18/2012 11:59:00 AM

Congratulations Rebecca .....Seren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/16/2012 7:31:00 AM

Now that I have learned from you I have an even greater appreciatin of what you have written here. Stunning masterful job you have done here.

Becca Lucas Date: 11/16/2012 7:48:00 AM

Thank you so much!!! :) That means a lot to me.

Richard Palmer

Date: 11/15/2012 10:15:00 PM

great write Rebecca,good luck dear

Becca Lucas Date: 11/16/2012 7:48:00 AM

thank you, Richard :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/15/2012 7:54:00 PM

Hi Rebecca Can you have a look at my terzanelle, see if I figured it out? Thanks so much.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2012 3:05:00 PM

oh, you got rid of the inhale line? Did you see my note to you? I don't think you needed to worry about it. But anyway, it remains a wonderful poem

Becca Lucas Date: 11/16/2012 7:47:00 AM

I put it back :) thanks for your advice

Becca Lucas Date: 11/15/2012 3:42:00 PM

Got your message and replied :) thanks

Becca Lucas Date: 11/15/2012 3:27:00 PM

Hi Andrea, no, I didn't see your note. Yes I changed it after I found that it was used already before, thanks for writing!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/15/2012 6:40:00 AM

Wow! I think it is even better than before, great job!

Becca Lucas Date: 11/15/2012 9:44:00 AM

Thanks, Richard, I value your opinions.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/14/2012 4:38:00 PM

Hi Rebecca See soup mail

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/14/2012 3:11:00 PM

inhale hope, what a majestic line!! You did yourself proud with this terzanelle!

Becca Lucas Date: 11/16/2012 7:45:00 AM

I really struggled with whether or not to keep that I found out it had been used... thank you for your advice, always appreciated from someone I admire as I do you. :)

Becca Lucas Date: 11/14/2012 4:00:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. Credit for the words "inhale hope" goes to Sharon K. Penman who wrote, "I inhale hope with every breath I take" (Author of Lionheart)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/14/2012 10:58:00 AM

I am taking in deep breaths and being filled with great joy, now my smile is no longer forced, I am truly thankful and unafraid. I really really like your poem. May you be lifted by the breath of God and fully experience his peace.

Becca Lucas Date: 11/14/2012 11:02:00 AM

Thank you, Richard, it means a lot to me to know that you like my poem and that you took the time to tell me. I wish the same blessings for you my friend.

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