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16th Floor

You should have told me you wanted to live on the sixteenth floor and I would’ve built one more I can’t read your mind I tried to all the time that was a mistake I made but you will find my record is clean except for these bandages soaking up my blood I guess I will go for the moment and I won’t come back for an hour then we can talk some more but for now I will just shut the door 
what did you think you would get a special privilege you’re just another person and I am not expecting too much from you in the first place just another emptying and filling of another suitcase 
you are inside 
but you will have to look inside a little more 
jumping back and forth 
rocking on a rocker or on a swing on the porch

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  1. Date: 11/14/2012 12:44:00 PM

    good ending image...pd

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 5:26:00 PM

    nice write