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Marriage

I don`t want you to walk behind me
I don`t want you to walk in front of me
I want you to walk beside me
Only then you will see
How beautiful it is to be free

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  1. Date: 1/7/2013 9:41:00 AM

    OOO! Short but so beautifully POWERFUL!

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 5:07:00 PM

    vesna, I remember this proverb from long ago. Thanks for reminding me of it.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 2:18:00 PM

    ! .."BEAUTIFUL".. ! I CANNOT WAIT UNTIL THE DAY IN WHICH I TOO WALK BESIDE MY HEART'S LOVE, SWEET BEAUTIFUL VESNA. THEN, I WILL ALSO KNOW THE BEAUTY IN FREEDOM. VERY LOVELY AND THANK YOU FOR YOUR KIND VISIT. HAPPY HOLIDAYS. MY LOVE, ALWAYS, RACHEL *

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:37:00 PM

    wow... Vesna, this is a mystery... Are you talking to your dad... who will give you away, freeing you into the arms of love,,, or is this for your soon to be husband, who is freeing you from your own... nice rhyme...pd

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:28:00 PM

    Enjoyed reading your great work..Great job...Thanks for stopping by..Sara