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A FADING REVERIE



    
Each reverie a breeze though savored I cannot hold, fading… it comes to the fore like tattered moth. *listed as free verse though this is actually a Naani: Naani is one of India's most popular Telugu poems written in 4 lines only. The total poem must only have 20 to 25 syllables. Debbie's Four, For, Fore Contest by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 11/23/2012 11:44:00 AM

    Excellent dream like. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 3:05:00 PM

    rereading this one. It really is nice, Nette.

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:05:00 AM

    this is beautifully magnificent! simple and solid, through the simple verse, it interprets lots of things and brings me to my own reverie through your words. I really enjoy the read - Hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 12:53:00 AM

    oh this is phenomenal visual .. an exciting write for Debbie and always a delight Nette luv .. we r all OK prepring for holidays now , more tests for me on my hands and nerve damage next week .. baby keeping me busy in Grandma role ..loving it ..he smiles so sweetly ..oh ..

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 7:56:00 PM

    this is absolutely gorgeous. Debs should love it, I sure hope.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 5:38:00 PM

    Wow! This "speaks volume", Nette. Beautiful though sad; I can relate. Awesome. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 4:24:00 PM

    I love all these images you have placed before my minds eye.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 3:19:00 PM

    Soft and silent like a wing that flutters.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 2:35:00 PM

    This write is full of amazing beauty that compares to none my friend! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous and immensely tremendous poem this afternoon! What power within your words you have shown here within your piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 2:07:00 PM

    you are fast becomming one of my favorite poets to read here

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 1:30:00 PM

    Which is more UNIQUE? Your spellbinding Poetry? Or your tantalizing good looks? Gotta say.... it's A TIE! (Still can't get that imagine of you in the field of yellow flowers...out of my mind...oh well...what's an imagination for...if not to enjoy.) thank you for your contribution. PS...I'm still that beautiful innocent little guy in my avatar.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 1:02:00 PM

    Exquisite picture upon which dreamy, reflective thoughts take flight...Sigh, I admire your art!

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:58:00 PM

    Very poetic with unique qualities..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Sara