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Magical Moments

Gazing lovingly upon her velvets
Beautiful heart shaped glass
Searching about the vanities 
Disclosing drawer and a brush 
Gliding it sensually through 
Her cascadings golden hair
Mesmerized as joy fills my eyes
Once more; such beauty her light
Giggling while turning knowingly 
Amid her silkened bareness
Cherries set in firm atop, soft
Voluptuous vanilla breast
Swaying gently fragrants perfect
Hourglass afore that my heart 
Timeless this love's windless 
Chills caressing my spirit 
Left drifting inside these her
Spellbinding, oceans painted eyes.

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  1. Date: 11/20/2012 7:57:00 PM

    Truly maadly deeply love this verse! THanks for the most kind comments. I really appreciate it Always, laura

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 9:37:00 AM

    when I read this, I felt like was standing and be a part of this wet painting, it was really beautiful. You are really the true artist :) - Hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 7:29:00 PM

    Those are magical moments to cherish, Rachel. Enjoyed reading your always exceptional reading. Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 5:12:00 PM

    Rare beauty, a highly suggestive painting with words. Congratulations, dear Rachel! My name is Hanitra

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:39:00 AM

    Beauty is the atonment for everything we own.

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 10:27:00 PM

    MAGICAL POETRY RACHEL LUV ..EVERY LINE IS A NEW CARESS TO EMBRACE .. BRUSH ON GOLDEN HAIR CASCADING ..BEAUTIFUL SCENE .. SULTRY IMAGERY ..I LIKE .. I LUV ..LUV ..

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 12:18:00 PM

    Simply beautiful!

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 8:57:00 AM

    Beautiful poem, Rachel. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 11/13/2012 8:33:00 AM

    Passionate and very descriptive..Thanks for stopping by..Sara