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Sun Rising

You need more grease on your hands to become a man
You need motivation and self esteem to be a powerful woman
How many nails will you grou(POUND)nd                                                             
To make success a remarkable sound?
How many people will you hug 
To calm them down and keep them from the shoulder shrug
How many times will you use manners 
Seems it makes people feel respected, that's what matters
                       
T-r-a-i-n goes by...sparks...sparks
They flicker away the dark 
Fairies of inspiration lift spirits of those who except their invitation
Sending a positive spell your way
Hope floats in clouds
Greets a new day
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  1. Date: 11/16/2012 5:30:00 PM

    Hello Sharon Manners and treating people with respect are the very definition of a powerful woman and a man and a remarkably beautiful sound seldom heard these days sadly. Arise Sharon. Cheers Chris

    Van Buskirk Avatar Sharon Van Buskirk Date: 11/16/2012 5:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Manners are extremely hard to come by. I miss them dearly:) Thanks for reading! Cheers, Sharon
  1. Date: 11/16/2012 6:50:00 AM

    Interesting work that you have penned..Sara

    Van Buskirk Avatar Sharon Van Buskirk Date: 11/16/2012 7:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wanted to try something different. thanks for reading:)