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together we were a pencil

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together we were a pencil

together we were a pencil i would write down all our dreams then you would erase them

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  1. Date: 11/29/2012 8:34:00 PM
    Lillian, thanks for visiting my page. I read this several days ago and it tickled me then but I forgot to tell you how much I liked it. It is sad, but very clever and I think, often is true in relationships.

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 5:29:00 PM
    LILLIAN, congratulation with your featured poem of the week. God Bless, you and your family during the holidays,, always~ PD

  1. Date: 11/20/2012 7:04:00 AM
    [smudged charcoal/ on a full page--the kettle whistles] Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 12:07:00 PM
    Good one Lillian. - Welcome you to the P-Soup. - Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. - Wish you luck. - Give comments and get comments. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 8:36:00 PM
    Hi Lillian, what a great write, I agree with Michael, didn't see the end coming. Rollo

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 7:33:00 PM
    Never saw the ending coming. Great poetry. Very very good!! Michael