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About This Poem

VEIL OF NIGHT




veil of night opens 

moist lace swelling on his trunk...

cherry and fragrant



Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku Contest of Sandy Ivy Davis
by nette onclaud

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    Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/20/2013 1:19:00 AM
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    Love the haiku nette ;}
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    kash poet
    Date: 12/30/2012 1:24:00 PM
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    Hey YOU!!Come Back!!HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    bl devnath
    Date: 11/23/2012 11:17:00 AM
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    Congratulation on your win, sorry for late. It's excellent. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl
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    Seren Roberts
    Date: 11/15/2012 2:28:00 PM
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    Congratulations ....Seren
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 11/15/2012 7:04:00 AM
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    Congratulations on your win in SandyIvy's "Natural/Nature Sexy Haiku" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 11/15/2012 12:57:00 AM
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    Belated congratulations on your win my dear friend, Nette! (SM) love/hugs, LG
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 11/13/2012 5:29:00 PM
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    CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS SULTRY LINE OF HAIKU LUV .. FEELING IT..
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 11/13/2012 4:57:00 PM
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    some great metaphors going on in this one. It is very good, Nette. Glad to finally see this one.
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 11/13/2012 1:53:00 PM
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    Nette, congratulations with your awesome sexy haiku... :-) pd
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 11/13/2012 12:03:00 PM
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    Great work that is in the winners' list..Congrats on your great work..Sara
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 11/13/2012 8:31:00 AM
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    A hot piece indeed, like it, Nette, Congrats!! Jag
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    kash poet
    Date: 11/13/2012 6:04:00 AM
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    Hey Nette,Congrats on your win!!Loved it on my first read.
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/13/2012 1:35:00 AM
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    Hey, visiting you to say CONGRATULATIONS WITH your winning poem in the contest: "Sexy Haiku" - fun contest and many good suggestions. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Sandy Ivy D
    Date: 11/12/2012 10:22:00 PM
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    Sexy haiku. TY, Sandy'
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 11/12/2012 10:48:00 AM
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    I agree with Michael below, this write has a passion that flows so perfectly all throughout it! I really enjoyed the heat that this poem creates from the simple words you have written here Nette! The way you wrote this piece is so very exciting and so very powerful, I love it! What a passionate write my good friend, Great Work!!
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 11/12/2012 9:03:00 AM
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    I like this one a lot.. And so will the rest of Soup.... Passion flows in it so nicely.... hugs n luv Michael
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 11/12/2012 5:17:00 AM
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    ‡ I Can Sense This Perfume Its Beauty Of Passion, Seeping Into My Deepest Spirit, Sweet Beautiful Fascinating Nette. Sensual, Fragrant, Lovely, Beautiful, Is The Gallery In Splendours Where I Find Your Magnificent Paintings Of Priceless Verse! This Treasure, And She Is Beautiful, Shall Find Her Place In Cherished Faves. Happy Holidays And Thank You For Your Kind Yet Wonderful Visit. My Love, Always, Rachel *
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    kash poet
    Date: 11/12/2012 3:48:00 AM
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    Sounds Yummy!!
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/12/2012 2:38:00 AM
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    ......:).....me like...Luck in contest Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)


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