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The Archer

Your arcing body Drawn, quivering like a bow I am, the archer

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  1. Date: 12/20/2012 9:50:00 PM

    Wow, what a great haiku. I love the simile here. I wonder what the metaphor for the arrow is. Love is the arrow maybe? It is all too deep for me. Very profound.

    West Avatar Rollo West Date: 12/20/2012 10:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hello Jon, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting on this write. Rollo
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 6:10:00 PM

    I'm hoping your job is love... Mr Archer... xox~pd

    West Avatar Rollo West Date: 11/11/2012 6:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    HI PD, thank you for coming by, i always love your comments. Rollo