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lifacide

Everyday is a battleground, I fight for every breath,
struggling to keep the pain of life from outweighing the finality of death.

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  1. Date: 11/16/2012 1:46:00 PM

    Everyday is a battle day, war in the little world of my mind.

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 9:56:00 AM

    Like your philosophy. Congrats on the selection. daver

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:22:00 PM

    Sorry to hear of so much pain. But you are right, it's better than death! Enjoyed. hugs, catie :)

    Whitby Avatar Robert Whitby Date: 11/11/2012 5:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I wasn't implying that it was better, just that I was struggling, but I do think it's better. TY
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:22:00 PM

    Deep... thank you for sharing.. I also know that this set is called (couplets) ,, hopefully it helps ,,your I do not know title... always~ LINDA

    Melody Lightning Ink Avatar Charles Melody Lightning Ink Date: 11/16/2012 1:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Linda, long time no see... Haha.. am missing you, i don't see this as couplet but free verse. Nothing couple about the poem. It is a free verse of 7 lines. Couplets are spaced in two lines stanzas.
    Whitby Avatar Robert Whitby Date: 11/11/2012 5:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the advice. I'm trying to figure all this out. haha!