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Deep Surrender

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Deep Surrender

In Deep Surrender In deep surrender I close my eyes Hearing you softly breathing by my side I gently send you sensual whispers in your dreams To find you waking up to a love that only I can bring Your eyes have captured diamonds through your soul’s treasured trove Your heart is a place of heaven I’ve always wanted to go In deep surrender I find myself holding you in the night Making love so passionately under the trance of the moonlight Soon the night will break and the sunrise will appear My eyes will open to live an endless dream that brought my true love here
Contest: Deep Dreams Sponsor: Michael Falotico November 11, 2012

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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 7:51:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super placement in Michael's "Deep Dreams" contest Gail. I am sorry this is late. Love, Carol

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 12/3/2012 8:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Good morning my sunshine. Thank you for congratulating me on my win in Michael's Deep Dreams contest. I wish you a happy and peaceful Christmas season luv. I hope you are doing OK these days. Love to you always, Gail
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 8:53:00 AM

    very beautiful, Gail. Congrats to you.

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/25/2012 9:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Andrea, thank you for commenting on my poetry today. Love always, Gail
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:05:00 PM

    Very passionate winning work..Congrats..Sara

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/24/2012 4:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sara, thank you for congratulating me on my win in Michael's contest. I hope you had a beautiful Thanksgiving. Hugs always, Gail
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:56:00 PM

    Gail, congratulations!;-) With your "deep dream" win in Michael's awesome contest. Good night~PD

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/24/2012 4:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    PD, thank you for congratulating me on my win in Michael's contest. I hope you had a beautiful Thanksgiving. Hugs and love always, Gail
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 11:20:00 AM

    congrats on a great win Gail

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/24/2012 4:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Joseph, thank you for congratulating me on my win in Michael's contest. I hope you had a beautiful Thanksgiving. Hugs and luv always, Gail
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:53:00 AM

    Beautiful! The third couplet is outstanding! Congratulations :)

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/23/2012 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Heather thank you for congratulating me on my win in Michael's Deep Dream's contest. Luv, Gail
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:07:00 AM

    A very lucky womans write! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/23/2012 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Debbie, thank you for congratulating me on my win in Michael's Deep Dream's contest. Luv, Gail
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 6:04:00 AM

    A beautiful write Gail ,would have placed it higher sweetheart xx

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/23/2012 10:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Mandy, thank you for congratulating me on my win in Michael's Deep Dream's contest. Luv, Gail
  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:45:00 AM

    Congrats Gail on your win in my Deep Dream contest... hugs Michael

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 5:44:00 AM

    congratulations Gail.....Seren

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/23/2012 10:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Seren, thank you for congratulating me on my win in Michael's Deep Dream's contest. Luv, Gail
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 12:59:00 AM

    gail your words continually intoxicate me to new realms of enjoyment .. this is evert girl's delightful dream of deepest love .. thankxx for making our night glow .. my hubby is all dreamy looking after reading with me ..oh..

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/14/2012 7:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Linda and your hubby, thank you for enjoying my poem Deep Surrender. Hugs and luv to you both, Gail
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 5:34:00 PM

    Beautiful poem, you may with to change the last word in the last stanza to --here. It makes more sense with what you have written. He sounds like a nice guy, I hope he realizes how lucky he is.

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 11/14/2012 7:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Richard, thank you for letting me know about the error on the last line, I just changed it and thank you for adding such a warm comment as well. Hugs always, Gail
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 8:17:00 PM

    I hear the beauty that this write has created my friend! I loved each and every moment that I read within this poem! I am enamored by the gorgeousness of this awesome piece, Great Work!!