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sexy haiku

legs long and curvy
a waterfall's sensual  pain
tongues bring release
















Written by Seren Roberts   11/11/2012

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  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:47:00 AM

    hey Seren sexy indeed...David

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/17/2012 11:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks David.
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 12:40:00 AM

    Like Ruben says-speachless, can't get any sexier than this, Seren:) Jag

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/17/2012 3:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    well done on your win, hmmm me thinks yours was sexier than mine. Still smiling over the comments though.....Seren
  1. Date: 11/16/2012 5:38:00 PM

    Speechless! Everything I say will be used against me or to convict me! LOL! No comments! : )

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/17/2012 3:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol Ruben all the comments made me grin, was worth doing, even though it didnt merit a place. ....Seren
  1. Date: 11/15/2012 7:43:00 PM

    staccato shudder//over easy stomach sigh//shyness slides open...Enjoyed your sensual ku...Ernest

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/16/2012 12:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow Ernest thats a good write. Thanks for comment.
  1. Date: 11/14/2012 5:06:00 AM

    expect a this one u r done..u hve to get it..thumb up

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/14/2012 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Tim ....Seren
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 4:25:00 PM

    Dreamy & steamy, nice one Seren....

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/14/2012 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks James, the comments have cracked me up laughing. Seren
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 11:09:00 AM

    I'm perspiring profusely! YIKES!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/13/2012 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    was waiting for your comment Jack lol u didnt disappoint me...Seren
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 9:00:00 AM

    yes ,yes ,yes,lol,nice write Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/12/2012 12:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lol Richard have changed a word. Merits another yes I think.....Seren
  1. Date: 11/12/2012 5:46:00 AM

    ahhhhh I love the Haiku and sweet images that follow.. hugs Michael

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/12/2012 6:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Michael. ...Seren
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:45:00 PM

    why would you want 2 re-look your haiku.. I love the sexy image you got going here. Well I'm not gonna look tooo long... LOL...I'm a female... But, the waterfalls, makes a good fall that screams OUCH!... xox~ the best of luck...pd

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/12/2012 12:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks pd .... Seren
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 4:39:00 PM

    Good luck in the contest~SKAT~

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/11/2012 5:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol Skat, thing this has caused a stir.....Seren
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 4:28:00 PM

    oh, now I see why all the comments!!! steamy steamy

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/11/2012 5:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    omg Andrea I dont know what to say....Seren
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 3:13:00 PM

    I like your sexy haiku, hope you have time to read my sexy haiku Seren. - - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/11/2012 5:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sure will Anne Lise ... Good luck.... Seren
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 1:48:00 PM

    Oh my..you just short circuit my computer:-) lol,..great haiku for the contest! Best wishes in the contest~arild

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/11/2012 1:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh Arild i am beginning to feel like a hottie rofl.. If the truth was knowm.......Seren
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:50:00 AM

    Hi Seren hope you entered this in the contest very sexy haiku should be a winner, all the best Owen

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/11/2012 11:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes I did , all in my imagination of course..Thank you Mills and Boon ....Seren
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:26:00 AM

    WOW Seren, you past steamy, now inferno. Rollo

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/11/2012 11:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    well a waterfall is quite a great place etc etc etc. ... Seren
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:22:00 AM

    now,,this is sexy... Seren, good luck in the contest...pd

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/11/2012 11:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    imeant rollo's reply for you, now i am embarrassed ... Seren
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 10:57:00 AM

    Wow, this is hot enough for the contest for sure. Whew, should be on top of the winner's list. Hugs, Gail

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/11/2012 11:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    omg is it that bad. ....Seren