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If

If i gave you my heart on a platter
Would you hold it with tinderness
Or smash it with a hammer

Do I know allready
Or just take a chance
A cold heart will never romance

So I entrust my heart, with yours to dance
That light and love
May forever romance

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  1. Date: 12/24/2012 9:12:00 PM
    Elizabeth, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 12/25/2012 4:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you P.D. Merry Christmas to u all, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 12/14/2012 1:53:00 PM
    Dear Elizabeth, Chances are if YOU gave YOUR Heart to one YOU LOVED and LOVED YOU Good things will Happen. I wrote a POEM " If I Could" same theme. I thank-YOU for YOUR many Gracious Comments, wish YOU a Happy Holiday Season and HOPE when I come back to see YOU Monday You Have Some new POEMS TO READ DO keep the Pen moving LOVE YOU ALWAYS and Forever YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 12/15/2012 5:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    well I sure hope so, my heart could do with a rest :) love as ever Elizabeth
  1. Date: 12/13/2012 10:11:00 AM
    if only we knew what one would do with you after saying 'yes!' guess its a risk to trust, lovely write, Elizabeth-Lucas-

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 12/13/2012 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Lucas, If only we knew a lot of things, but that would make it too easy i guess, such is life :)
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 4:49:00 AM
    As a hopeless romantic, they really appealed to me! Thanks for sharing this lovely rhyme!

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 12/9/2012 1:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Eileen, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 4:40:00 PM
    COPOL WRITE MATE JUST PUT MY POEM IF I BACK ON HERE REEDITED YOU HAVE SOME SOUP MAIL MATE XX DAVIDSCOTT

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 4:02:00 AM
    Lovely poem Elizabeth! If - that is the question that borders on trust. It's like telling someone - I trust you to share in my possibilities. Well written.

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 12/4/2012 10:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Vicky, love Elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/28/2012 10:14:00 AM
    wicked did you know I wrote a poem called if I like your chocie of words here xx davidscott

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 11/28/2012 10:48:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you David, I think we all know the answer to our ifs, most of the time, Its a case of do or don't for me nowdays, but if the sun comes out tomorrow, I sure will enjoy it :) xx
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 9:01:00 AM
    Hi! it's wonderful appealing poem. You are strong in heart. Thanks for ypur comment. Loved always, bl

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 11/11/2012 10:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you bl, glad you enjoyed, love elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/11/2012 8:39:00 AM
    I love this simply put. May you always be filled with light, Love Justin

    O'Driscoll Avatar Elizabeth O'Driscoll
    Date: 11/11/2012 10:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Justin, light and love to you always, elizabeth