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Below is the poem entitled NEARNESS OF NOVEMBER which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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In froths of a sky never ever ending, she throttles like a half—shelled woman slow to prance in the midst of obedient breeze, her movement wrapped like a hundred cider vines… How orange are her nights. Tipping the light with curves arched and flowing with rain, she mounts her tinseled limbs on autumnal crest. The trees, seeds, and candles in her eyes lightly open the fingertips of near November. Quick to beat on belly drums, her tresses of fire melt the liquid stars in one tender rush… How native and young is she. After holding the skirt that lifts into a dance in the midst of patient time, the moon hangs like a violin ready to strut for a waltz that drifts on appliqués of her arms. And if every detail of lace in her malleable clay can be sewn in the light touching her shade, this she shall bring too. In near November froth. Susan's Another Poem Not for a Contest

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  1. Date: 11/19/2012 3:32:00 AM
    It's wonderful personification. You always write in such a way that I become confuse many times, but at last I enjoy. Congrats on your win, loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 5:23:00 AM
    Yeaahh!!...Congrats on your win!!!

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 12:13:00 AM
    the title sings already a beautiful song which is followed by an impressive symphony. Like your poems anyway but this one comes in loud and clear. Felicitations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 3:07:00 PM
    Came across this one that I see won a contest. wow, I dont know what place you got, but this is some awesome personification.

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 2:34:00 PM
    A beautiful write, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 1:03:00 PM
    Mercy Me, Nette...gotta agree with Deb...this should have taken first, although I think she deserves a good 'mooning' herself (God bless her)... Congratulations! - Tim

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 6:44:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in this contest Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 4:16:00 PM
    Hmm...Wonderful and splendid write,Nette..Good presentation..Congrats on your win ..and thanks for the placing of my poem in your contest....Kudos to you,Pal.....

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:44:00 PM

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 1:15:00 PM
    Nette, congratulations in Susan's "Another fun poem" contest... have a nice day... :-) Linda...

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 11:30:00 AM
    You know I LOVE THIS...but..the moon is in almost everything you write nette, really, like a word i use over and over I'm faving this one..but you'd be best served to lay off the moon for a wee bit? ;) say 2 weeks? a month ;)..well if not just know you are MOONING! Light & Love [this deserved a #1] Congrad's

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:18:00 PM
    Beautifully done Nette! I love how your work is always so in tune with nature. Nice!

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:15:00 PM
    You are simply rocking. Such a marvellous array of words here, hugs:) Jag

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 1:51:00 PM
    Descriptive work that was a delight to read this afternoon..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..The scent of asphalt or tar is very strong for sure..Ha! Ha! Sara

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:13:00 AM
    Ooh..them lil`fingers of yours sure knows how to bring lovely words to the paper.A delightful poem to read this Sunday evening over here:) Come dance..come waltz with me dear nette! Beautiful poem:) Hugs~Arild

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:09:00 AM
    You bring me to anther time and place my friend! I am enthralled with this vastly incredible poem Nette! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous and enlightening piece this afternoon! I thank you for your generous comments that you give me for my poetry Nette, it means a lot to me! This is a phenomenal poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 9:49:00 AM
    A poem to linger over and breathe in the atmosphere.You are really good!

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 8:55:00 AM
    You have used the weekend to beautiful thoughts .... they have you written down in your poem. - Thank you! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 8:20:00 AM
    Wow...amazing poetry from you Nette.This takes me to another world!

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 8:11:00 AM