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What Is Love

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What Is Love

If a woman doesn’t have a ring, she doesn’t have a thing.
Action speak louder than words to show love by marriage 
But a woman can't push on love like a baby in a carriage
A man purpose is to provide and make a woman needed and cherished
But with out valuing responsibilities, the love will perish.
A woman is not valued unless she becomes a man 
And because I am an old fashioned gal, I feel the system is out of hand
Women’s lib and egos becomes the ugly seed 
Like an uncontrollable power trip and disposal marriage creed.
Life will be selfish. Life will be cruel 
Love is a broke business rule 
Prince to the risqué of damsel in distress is in the old days
And lost chivalry does not impress me today
without a ring a woman is strung along 
and a man's options are a broken song
God has his ways to deal with sin
and all the wrong ways we are living
I already knew why buy the cow when you can get the milk for free
that is why I moved 1400 miles from my ex fiance

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  1. Date: 7/29/2014 8:15:00 AM
    This is well written and brilliantly expressed.. you last few lines suggests this words are actually coming out from your personal experience right? Thanks a lot for the share.... Nothing can be as true as these lines when love is the issue in relation to a women.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 3:42:00 AM
    Beautifully expressed...love is eternal..awesome piece..thanks for the share...amazing piece :-)

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 11:28:00 PM
    I like this Jennifer -'love is eternal', but without a pledge it becomes easy for hearts to be broken. Nicely done!

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 6:54:00 AM
    Thanks Elizabeth, but my poem was just a work in progress and not finnished. I needed to wrap it up more and speak from experience and from the heart. I guess i'm finnished with it. I bet a song will come out sooner or later

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 6:14:00 AM
    enjoyed your write jennifer, have a beautiful day, love elizabeth